a sequel would be really good...or rather simmply continuation...
anyway I liked how you explained who Lucifer is(this way it would bother me less when Akako calls him his friend)
but I definitely don't like how authors tends to label him insane, sure it's easy to call someone that but wiser to not choose this easy way to explain his actions(that's sour subject for me, I keep it important, mental state that is)

hoo-boy. speaking with the Adversary, you *need* Poker Face!

"Fell-san? You made excellent time. Didn't I just leave you back at the office?"

that's my favorite line.

And, um, what *does* he know of Kid's father? (worriedly)

"Can't we just say he's some guy I met and leave it at that?" "I rather think not." Hakuba's intelligence and concern and understated manner are all concisely indicated here. Yes, encounters with the Adversary had *better* be analyzed!

as an ally against Snake's group/the Men in Black, i'd favor Conan . . . but certainly Hakuba is someone Kaito has better experience of.

grateful for this angelic encounter,
db

Yeek. Kaitou talked to the Devil? I thought the Devil only came down to Georgia to challenge people to fiddling contests. (sorry, too much Charlie Daniels band)

man, now i hafta go back and reread all your other stories again. if only you didnt write such interesting stories...jeez.

Oh. Wow. *G* "I'm a man of wealth and taste", indeed. And a very sympathetic view of the mythical character!

Interesting story. Are you going to write any more angel fics? They are really intriguing and original.

Um...if I had water right now, I think I probably would've chocked. IBLIS!? Oh GEEZE, Kaito really draws the weird ones. (Shakes head) Well, at least there isn't any ill intent. Yet. Wow, interesting twist. I'll definately read the next one.