 Persiana13 2009-04-01 . chapter 1Hey, GrimlockX4.
I liked it a lot. It's definitely funny. The idea of a trap door never occured to me. Something new to think about.
I'm eager to see how Moonshadow and Cheetor goes. That looks like to be a hysterical couple.
Persiana: Any more hysterical than Simon and Vixen being paired up?
Wonder Man: HELP! Vixen, get off of me!
Vixen (body contorted like a snake around Simon): Come on, handsome! You haven't seen how else I can move!
If you are planning to do a sequel, do so with villains next! Funny! Keep the ideas flowing and I am extremely grateful that I was able to inspire you. Keep writing! |