Very dark and depressing, but wonderfully written. I love the actions of the characters, their inner working and thoughts...in movies people can say a hundred words with a single gaze, but you can make characters say them simply by describing that gaze. There are very few words that could describe the greatness of it all ;D

I love it!

Geez-that wasn't as depressing as i expected. It was sometimes hard to see what was going on but at the end things cleared up and i really liked how you described Jim and Spock's love/hate relationship.

Hi,

I really, really liked this, although it was damned depressing. I'd like to think Kirk is better than that, and that Spock is too. I really, really would--but yeah. Depressing as hell, but very well executed and very well done. I loved the image, too, of Spock dancing and flirting, of McCoy watching them all dance so beautifully, right before everything went to hell.

Well done. I am, of course, pining for the next chapters of Cloak and Dagger (yay new chapter! and it better be happier than this one) but this fic was marvellous too.

THAT WAS THE SINGLE MOST DEPRESSING THING I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE. I HATE IT WAH

MEANING I LOVE IT

AND F I CAN'T STAND IT i'll go read some of your other stuff now teehee!

Oh, yeah! Vulcan vengence -- deliciously ruthless. I always thought that Kirk showed a mean streak whenever he was challenged, so I'm not surprised that he turned out to be a tyrant when things went bad. Anna, you always capture the characters so well, and when you turned that skill to this dark tale, the result is absolutely chilling. The range of your talent is daunting. Thanks for this story -- and for all the others.

"She’s mine, they aren’t."

Damn straight I... oh. Wait. You meant Miira.

But, I already said this fifty million times, so I won't repeat it. Your characterization is a masterpiece. Your characterization is nearly always a masterpiece, especially with Kirk and Spock. You have got to be the most even handed, HONEST author I have ever seen for them.

wauw... just wauw.

You went directly from brilliance to an just okay story to brilliance again. And I speaking in the perspective of that I officially see you as a professional writer. My standard expectations for you is very high.

God this is so dark, I feel so depressed and trapped and somehow I am sure that is what you wanted me to.

I wish I had anything constructive to say but there is nothing you could do better, and I have so hard a time pinpointing why exactly this is brilliant (then again if you can pinpoint it it wouldn't be brilliant.) other then what I have told you before that your stories has such a natural flow in them.

You really do have a flair for those darker themes in your stories, I would suspect you could find a very interesting challenge in writing a full story meant to be funny, it's a whole other genre then what you are writing. But you absolutely don't need to, what you are doing now is... well I think I have already written brilliant to many times for one singe review.

Have you ever considered writing a short inspired from the series called The Twilight Zone? it's very much withing your range and it would be darn exiting to see what you could come up with.

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No kittens...
I was almost tempted to cut the oxygen myself.:laughs: