|Reviews for Out of the Office|
| KareBear1965 11/11/10 . chapter 1
that was hot.
| cbrendible 8/5/10 . chapter 1
Awesome. Maybe you should include this into the story and change the story's rating to include this outtake.
| MsWhiteChristmas 4/4/10 . chapter 1
That was... HOTT! Jesus, i loved it! You are a great lemon writer!
| xx-Fran-Rue-Melark-xx 1/17/10 . chapter 1
Please R&R mine
| jakeluver 12/7/09 . chapter 1
OMG! that was really good! LOVES IT!
| BabyDoll 10/2/09 . chapter 1
I liked that story it was quite interesting i mean i have never thought of carlisle in that manner before and well it was quite the treat i especially like your role play of Jasper being the big brother over protective type it is a nice other side to him and i really think it fits his part in Twilight you have done a great job and hopefully you dont stop writing soon because i and probably many others enjoyed that story possibly a teeny bit to much lol
| angelaboosh 9/24/09 . chapter 1
That. Was. Brilliant.
Think I might like this more than the original version, hehe.
| mesmerizeme 8/20/09 . chapter 1
Hot damn that was good! Too bad its over! :(
| cursegirl 6/23/09 . chapter 1
i like this version better you should continue this one! )
| naelany 5/25/09 . chapter 1
Hello Mr Hot Bitch! Wowza
| Marijee 5/2/09 . chapter 1
Totally HOT! Loved it!
| cravingtwilight 4/29/09 . chapter 1
your story is very sexy! i liked it alot! looking forward to reading the rest of your story!
| YazPistachio19 4/25/09 . chapter 1
I really liked this chapter, I just wanted to let you know why I didn't vote for it in the HB contest. It really is great as a chapter, or an outtake from Carried Away. But as a one shot, its a little confusing. There is a little bit of backstory that needs explaining. It was, however, interesting enough to get my interest and as a result I read Carried Away. And now I can't wait to read more of that.
So really, I just wanted to tell you that I did enjoy this, and I thought it was well written, just not great as a One Shot.
| mudpuddledemon 4/22/09 . chapter 1
What? But... it's over? really? no more? I'm so sad. I was so into it, I'm a little dazed. Wow. Good job you.
| orionfoo 4/22/09 . chapter 1
now that was hot, I want to hear more of this story.