wow...awesome episode!

Poor Lypix... I wonder what would happen next? =3

CLIFFHANGER!

I swear, you're improving so much :D I loved the last two lines, you really know how to build up tension! This is pretty sweet!

I must say that you have excelled my original expectations. The wording work very well, and the subtle mention of the moment works very well.

I am proud of you

Wedding Crashers! Literally! XDD Nice... At least we know someone is glad to be out of that situation.

And thus, the drama amps up! I like the chapter name, its definitely forboding :D And I'm glad you updated! Yays!

So everyone's going to rescue Lypix, who might be married to the Dark Ace? Eeks... I can imagine Ace as a husband...

Wife: Honey, can you take out the garbage-?

Husband: BIT BUSY DESTROYING THE ATMOS! Be home in a few weeks! *speeds off on skimmer*

Wife: *complacent* Oh, alr- wait, WHAT?!!

Dewm.

:D

This is so awesome!

You could say I am a follower of sorts of your stories. They're so awesome!

Nice beginning. =3 You're just softening the readers up until the really bad stuff happens. Continue, please!

KISS!

Romance!

Awesomeness! :D

(and then, as soon as their lips meet, Missy blows something up and ruins the moment. Silly Missy. XD)