What a heartbreaker! I believe you've captured John perfectly. He always puts others before himself and strives to do what's right. Thanks

Very sweet and touching! What a sad thing for Crichton to have to do, but I could easily see this happening. Well-written, too.

Are you a member of Terra Firma, btw? The Farscape fandom here at isn't very active, but the fan fiction section at Terra Firma is pretty good.