uh I did read it twice >_<
And I love it XD

Please write the next chapter!
greetings
philo

Very cute story!

aw-^^- love this storyXD! please update next cahpter! I loved the last few sentences in this chapter;)

Nice one i've always wondered what he would say if someone just straight up told him "that" asuming he isn't as dense as he seems, really looking forward to your update

wah >_<
please write!
Luffy x Nami 4ever

oh, what a wonderful story >_<
when are you going to update?? you stopped on such a place -.-
wanna know how luffy's gonna respond to her!!
come o~n, update soon!

OI OI OI! Cliff-hangers are evil!

This is propably the most amazing fanfic I've ever read.
It's perfectly in character, at least the way I like to imagine them, has a funny store and pairs up Luffy and Nami, my favourite couple of the series. I'm sorry that I'm not able to give you any constructive criticism, I hope praise will be enough for now.

I have absolutely no idea what any of this is about - I think I say that every time I read something of yours set in some Manga/whatever universe I've never seen :-) - I'm only here because of your brilliant Harry Potter stories.

But I have to register my sincere appreciation of and applause for this line:

> He said, "Nami, you don't tell a person you love them because you want something from them. You tell them so they know how wonderful you think they are."

Wonderful. I'm no expert in matters of romance but I felt very good thinking a bit about that and my own tenuous experience with that sort of feeling (and thank you for that, by the way).

Hey, I still think your Harry Potter Harry/Hermione stories are among the best around - such brilliant character studies and treatment of the relationship/love between the two - and if I knew where you lived I might pay you money or torture you for another one :-) but it was great to see some more wonderful funvince insight in this weird 'Straw Hat' (?) thing. Good on you, and thanks!

Is that it? Come on!1

So far I'm liking this. I like that you made honorable mention of Nami's injuries - it reminds me that there still must be physically unattractive features of her if she were a real person (her boobs are more popular than herself IMO). And those little moments you mentioned about those scars are a good refresher for anyone who's followed along the series until now, almost forgot some of those scenes.

Wow, those last few lines were incredible. You made them very poetic yet it felt like it was definetly Nami that was thinking those thoughts. Going more on that, you're great at writting stories about these two. I can't tell you how annoying it is when authors just seem to write whatever love story pops into their head and simply replaces 'girl' with the word Nami and 'boy' with Luffy. What you did here though, you did it very specifically and thoughtfuly for the two of them.

Usopp also had some very nice and funny lines. I just love his involvement in this chapter the most out of everyone. Just out of curiousity though, are you writting Nami getting advice from a different strawhat each chapter?

Can't wait for the next chapter!
If it was white chocolate, I'd take that over gold coins any day.
~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

Nice and slow - with a twist in the end - looking forward to the next chapter!

I love the chocolate coins part XD.

I really, really, really, really love the Ussop+Nami friendship/interaction on this chapter, from how the conversation started and everything to how it ended, seriously Nami's teasing remark made me grin.

I can't wait for the next chapter.