|Reviews for Elapse of Twenty|
| Nenne 1/17/10 . chapter 1
I don't like the epilogue either, but I found this a little sad. I think I'd rather just have them young and with everything ahead of them for ever.
| ScreamForSOH 9/20/09 . chapter 1
Nice set up, the scene/character change was very clever and created a lovely sense of connection. Good work.
| AnimeMandi22 4/12/09 . chapter 1
this was great! wish it was a little longer thought
| IchigoPudding 4/4/09 . chapter 1
Aww that was so cute!
I love how at the end of one bit it goes "..." and the next person finishes it XD
| CortneyJ143 3/31/09 . chapter 1
This is really really good! It was written in a really interesting way, and I loved it!