I don't like the epilogue either, but I found this a little sad. I think I'd rather just have them young and with everything ahead of them for ever.

Nice set up, the scene/character change was very clever and created a lovely sense of connection. Good work.

this was great! wish it was a little longer thought

Aww that was so cute!

I love how at the end of one bit it goes "..." and the next person finishes it XD

IP

This is really really good! It was written in a really interesting way, and I loved it!