Ignore JPMORGAN. You can let the trouble start between chapter 2-5. But here's a suggestion: Gizmo get's wet from a bottle of water at the garage and spawns a mogwai who seems nice to the Peltzers but hostile to Gizmo and transforms into a gremlin. Make that mogwai the villain of the fan-fiction.

nice chapter

can't wait to see what will happen next.

I like it its a good start and I really hope you update. Personally I hope theres a Stripe/Mohawk gremlin in this. Preferably one that combiens the best qualities of the two ie Stripes intelligence and leadership and Mohawks cruelty and aggressivness. Now I wish there was a Gremlins 3. Hope to see more.

I think that you have a great start, but need to work on the puncuation a bit. When is the trouble going to start.

The Gremlins do rock. The story's good so far. I love how you focus on what Gizmo thinks. Giving him such curious and cute thoughts. Its always cute to include him chewing on things like rubber.