LOL :D

hilarious!

Oh. My. Lord. *snigger* What a hoot!

I think the 'insane' in your posting name is very apt!

Hilarious! I don't know where you get all your ideas, but I wish you could give several members of this site a map to its location.
And the best part is the end. Max! Balls!

lol. Inappropriate laughter in the work place, my co workers now think I’m crazy.

Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha! Totally LOL. That was great.

That was the best laugh I've had all day. LOL. Thank you!

:-D He,he - very funny. I admit, I thought THAT just couldn't work, when I read the summary. But somehow you made it work. :-) Great job!

Favorite parts:

--...“The boobs,” Alec explains impatiently. “The boobs were there and the angle was all wrong.”
Max bites her lip for a moment and then she’s gone again dissolving into fits and laughter and under other circumstances, it would be a welcome site. With the year she’s had, Max deserves to laugh until she cries. He opens his mouth, almost ready to tell her that but she’s pointing at his chest and looks red in the face and he decides never to ever speak to her again. ...
(made me laugh, and yeah, Max deserves "to laugh until she cries")

--...Alec is tempted to scream into the receiver, tempted to yell No! No this cannot fucking wait! but he’s a trained Manticore soldier and he can’t make himself misrepresent a non-fatal situation. “Yeah,” Alec says. “Yeah I guess it can wait.”
(Somehow I like the whole paragraph a lot. The picture you draw here is just perfect - Logan in the middle of an EO mission, and Alec telling him he's fine, although he just found out he has boobs. :-))

--...Alec turns around to find a dark hair man sitting up next to him. He has smooth, pale skin, full lips and the barest hint of stubble on his chin.
“I’m sorry,” Alec says, “but do I know you?”
“Not funny, Alec,” the guy says. “It’s me, Max!” She freezes. Then very slowly, she looks down. “Balls.”
(:-D - PERFECT ending!)

Thanks.

You know, I can't really blame Max for the laughing. I was about three seconds away from spitting coffee all over my keyboard at the line //“The boobs,” Alec explains impatiently. “The boobs were there and the angle was all wrong.”// Which isn't to say that I adored that section more than, oh say, the part where Alec tries to pick up Original Cindy and gives himself away because of the jeans line, or the part where Alec ruminates on Logan's desperate need to get laid, because I loved those sections too. In fact, I think I loved just about every sentence of this story.

Hahaha omfg that was good. You are awesome!

Lolomg this is GENIUS. Seriously, I read the summary and already loved it. I was giggling the whole way through.

Is there going to be more of this?

Great job. =D

ha ha Funniest story ever,

Alec is hot so no suprise everyone wants him but omg logan in the bathroon! Hilarious!
And Max's last line..."balls" genius.

Congratulations I was worried that Dark angel fics were going to the toilet but you've proved me worng. I'm off to check out your profile page.. hopefully you've got lots of stories.

Thanks for the laughs

I was gonna let this one wait... but the summary was just too great of a catcher. This was flippin' hilarious! I loved it. Seriously couldn't even stop laughing. Thank you.

Even though this is a crack!fiic (and an EXCELLENT one at that) I like that Logan is actually involved with stuff.

And then Alec borrows hot girl clothes. lol. I LOVE it! And Alec flirting with OC... yay. And then Logan not realizing Alec is Alec... even better. Seriously, I burst out laughing at that part.

And then it gets really crack!fic when Logan and Alec are driving back to Sandeman's and then Alec starts thinking about there being sexual tension... This part also made me literally laugh out loud, "When they get to Logan’s place, Alec collapses onto a sofa and Logan mumbles something about research and disappears into the next room. Which is actually the bathroom."

Annd then Max turns into a dude. Wow.

This is just sheer AWESOMENESS.

Errors:

"They need to mount and operation to smuggle half a dozen exiled transgenics to a safer location, Logan’s the one for the job."

"Alec turns around to find a dark hair man sitting up next to him."

-Princess-

Hahaha, I bet Manticore never thought of consequenses like those for messing with animal DNA :)

Last line = epic.