I liked your story.

Really.

Now, I'm going to tell you why.

First, there's the part where it's dark, depressing. Not something most people like to write- I, for one, enjoy writing those silly pieces of fluff and go all upset when I find myself writing angst. Angst is tricky to play with- you want it to work. To feel real. I think yours did.

But you didn't end it on a "Woe that is me, I'm going to be forever traumatized". There was definitive hope in there.

Then, I appreciate the irony of the situation- she is the Seer of a Champion, supposed to see danger so Angel can fight it off. Yet she never saw the danger coming at her (as opposed to that one time she did in season 2) and Angel wasn't there to save her, rescue the damsel in distress, help the hopeless. It is damn fine irony, if you ask me.

Third, I kind of liked the Fang Gang becoming one of the most important part of your story. You could have pushed more- after all, Fred does wonder about why they all like Cordy so, and never is her question answered. I mean, we do get it that they are a big family and that they worry about her and that it's not fair. It's just, I could use more Cordy-loving. You know, of the obvious kind. XDD Not that I'm saying you did anything wrong. *shrugs* Just my own personal taste.

Cordy comes through it by herself, mostly, and that's Cordelia Chase for you. Thanks for not making her horridly out-of-character, as I have seen it happen too many times before.

Your narration was good, though I can remember being just the slightlest bit confused at times. Not that it matters (but I remember thinking you could use line breaks if you were to switch scenes or something- but maybe I'm mistaken)

I'm not sure about how I feel about no one ever finding out who attacked Cordy. I mean, can't the Dark Avenger avenge the one person he cares the most about in the world? (And I can hear the "But Buffy!" argument coming from a few people. Whatever)

I'm sure if they found him, Cordelia would see what a weasel the guy is, stand up to him, kick his ass, and take control of her panic again. The guys should find him, if only to give Cordelia that chance...

Does that mean they gave up on her? I'm not quite sure. Because we're taking boys that would go (and have gone) to hell dimensions without a second thought to rescue her... But who let her die in season 5. (Without even a blasted funeral episode! Or further mentions, except twice from Angel saying he lost Cordy.)

You know, by now, you should so be thinking "And I thought my author note was lenghty". I have a slight tendency to go rambling or babbling. Sorries, shutting up now.

You did good work.

great story

Awsome story!

So sweet...

Anyway, please update! I wanna know the end!

I LUVED IT! great fic, especially the first few chapters. The ending could of been better but i understand why you did it. overall, great job!

I read the whole thing. Couldn't stop in fact. You got everything right. The speech, the characters, the use of language. I'm very impressed.

this was a really good, well thought out fic. i think you should be proud of it. can't wait for another fic!

Ok, wow. I had to reread through most of the story 'cuz, uh, I kinda forgot what happened in previous chapters :

Anyways, that's totally beside the point. My point being that I loved this fic, as I said before. And this last chapter was no exception. It's a bitter taste of reality though, but unfortunately things like this happen whether we know about it or not, or whether we want to believe it or not.

Thank you for this wonderful piece of fiction.

MissKitie

Very impressive, tackling such a difficult subject in such a sensitive way. I could believe Cordelia's reactions, btw-she's not a support group type of gal, and asking for help from her friends had to be difficult enough for her. Leaving the case unresolved isn't satisfactory; it's real. All too real, unfortunately. I'm glad you had the guts to do that. Excellent, though painful, work.

I just wanted to add that I am so glad that you decided to continue this story. I also like how you address such a tragic and horrific event with such seriousness and sense of realism. I agree that too many people use the subject of rape in fanfics as some plot point without the regard that such a subject deserves. I love how you mentioned and describe how this violence was not only done to Cordelia, but to the entire AI family. They are all reeling from this violation, and are trying to deal with one of their own being so hurt. I also love the interaction between Cordy & Angel and Wes & Cordy (beginning chapters). I like how you explore the cruelty and evilness of humanity, because this is a very real but often downplayed aspect of life in the show. Great job so far!

Excellent job! So glad you've continued! I'm looking forward to the final chapter!

First off I just have to say I made the mistake of starting to read this while I was at work. I couldn't tear my eyes away from it! Glad I didn't get in trouble though... )

Anyways, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Usually fic's that deal with rape, etc, I cringe at. A lot of people don't put much thought or taste into them, but this was done with class. I understand and agree with the fact that you didn't go into detail about what happened, besides the reader will get the picture anyway, you don't have to spell it out for them.

I always like reading fic's that are based around getting into a characters mind and such, and this was done really well... Poor Cordy though. I'm sure that's got to be the most horrid thing for anyone to go through, and I think you dealt with the issue very well through the characters.

I'm eagerly awaiting your final chapter for this. Awesome job so far. Brava

Excellent! I like it; it's nice to read something different ... makes you think.

I am really impressed with this story. Not many people are brave enough to explore so sensitive an issue, even in the context of fanfiction, and take it seriously. Often it's watered down and made trite, but you've been sensitive and honest in your prose. Very good, I'm waiting for more.

i thought that was great! you need to finish it i need to know what happens! I loved it great writting!

I'm really enjoying this. Characterisations are excellent, Angel's guilt coupled with Cordelia's sense of complete unsafety works very well. Am anticipating updates with glee!