that was sweet

Nice. I don't think I've ever seem this pairing.

Nice. I don't think I've ever seen a pairing like this.

Good job :)

You did FANTASTIC Writing about Lilly's Feelings & Thoughts about Her Lover Miley! I LOVE Your VERY SENSUAL Tale! You are VERY CREATIVE about Lilly only cracking open 1 eye to drink in Miley! Lilly's LOVE for Miley is VERY BEAUTIFUL! You did AMAZING Writing describing Miley! Lilly is VERY SWEET not wanting to disturb Miley's sleep! You write from Your VERY BEAUTIFUL HEART!

OH. MY. GOD.

You go, girl! This was absolute perfectness 3

That was rather beautifully written, my friend! I like the use of all the sense, it actually feels like i'm there with Miley too!

Even though Lilly acts tough a lot of the time, she's such a softie when it comes to her best friend/obvious soul mate ) they are perfect together.

Awesome story, i love it )

Loved it, awesome job! P

This is really good. I love the sensory images. :) Lilly and Miley are just too cute.

wow, not bad. I really enjoyed reading it )

I loved it. Are you going to continue?

Awesome story. I'm pretty sure this is my favorite of yours so far, it is just that sweet. I don't know why, but my favorite line is 'Her Miley is asleep'. It is just the one that stood out the most. Great job. Keep up the good work.

This was sweet... Good job. (:

Angeiica

I loved this.

Thank you for writing out a journey for the senses! Oh, did I quite enjoy this ditty...a sensory enjoyment for all to read, really. Well done, though honestly, I feel like sound was a bit neglected. Heh, I suppose that has to do with the fact that...well, Miley's sleeping. (Sorry...I have a THING for her husky, whiskey and cigarette style voice.)

Awesome Job, nonetheless.