good story i liked it alot, very interesting.

liked it :)

YAY! I'm the 400th review for this story!
Anyway, I love this story. Hearing Bella call Emmett and Rosalie by 'Mom' and 'Dad' was weird, yet I wasn't too creeped out by it. The way you write is also wonderful and if you put that together with the plot of this story, it's a fantasic story! I can't believe this story has only gotten 400 reviews. I bet that people are just too lazy to write a review.
~Twilighter

my birthday's on march 24 =D

i liked it!

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KUDOS!

LOVED IT!
outstanding

I love how Edward and Alice save her from her burning house and how Rose and Emmett are going to be her parents!

loved it!!

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I read up to chapter 7 where the rest of the Cullens are introduced to Bella, and now I'm wondering why would Bella, who grew up with vampire parents, not recognise other vampires? And why would she not even know them? What reason do Rosalie and Emmet have to keep quiet about the existance of the rest of their family? I get that they can't have contact because of the tracker, but if they love their family, they should at least tell Bella stories about them.
I'm sorry, I really like the plot idea, but I won't continue to read it due to the inconsistency of the story.
Perhaps you can revise it a bit? Then I would love to read it again!
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GOOD STORY BUT CAN YOU PUT IN MORE POV'S IT WOULD BE NICER.TRUST ME I AM A PROFESSIONAL AT READING FANFICTIONS AND I KNOW THIS STUFF. IAM NOT BEING COCKY. GREAT STORY SO FAR KEEP IT UP

OMG Such a great story! EDWARD AND BELLA FOREVER! LOV IT

YAY i loved this story very good! i like the idea for ur next story! Wonderful writer you are!

OMG! THIS STORY WAS COMPLETELY perfect! LIKE IT! Congratulations for the beautiful story and thanks for your attention and compromise with your readers! Above all: keep writing, you're verry talented!
Yeah, i love happy endings... if i could i would be crying a lot right now! Great job!

AW! This story was so god! I loved it! Thank you so much for keeping it updated and not forgetting about it before it was even finished. Like some of the authors on this site.

-zukoluver45