It so cute! Perfect! Absoulutly perfect!

Ah, finally I get to finish this! Not the ending I'd have expected - bittersweet, I suppose, but then that always makes the sweet part sweeter, doesn't it? My brain is now thoroughly goo-ified from the sheer adorable <3

Yes! please, please, please make a sequel. i loved this story and it'd be absolutely wonderful if there was a sequel!

Oh my goodness, you nearly scared me there for a second but as I kept reading on and saw that they were staying together, my exact thoughts were, "Thank god! my first hunch was wrong and my second one was right!" You had me going there, you really were and I'm glad for that. I'm so happy that Rock and Blues are together! ^_^ Please make a sequel of this! oOe that's a lot longer than this one! I think you really should! It's too good to end like this! Please!

I don't think I have ever been so happy that the protagonist dies before. XD

They get to be together as navis? Oh, I've said it once and I'll say it again--you never cease to amaze me! The last half of this chapter was simply beautiful. I can't say I cried (I just never do) but I'm sure I WOULD have if I were a less stoic person. LOL

The ending was a nice wrap up to the story. I know you were worried about loose ends, but in the end there were no gaping holes or important questions leaving me blank stared. Oh~ You simply have no idea how much I love the idea of Saito coming back as Rockman! :D I do, however, think this piece would be more powerful as a stand alone. Perhaps you can write other pieces that elude to this one, but not a complete sequel.

Well then, until next time,
~TB

PS: I got all the pics you sent me! It's just taking me 4ever to get through 'em because I'm too lazy to take out the spaces in the links. hehehe...

God, that was beautiful.
I just started and finished reading this fanfic today and... damn. I'm about to cry. It was the best mix between angst and romance and... more angst, actually; and the ending just broke it, really, REALLY broke it... best way to end the angst you put during the whole chapter *gives an award* (?)
I'm going to be your biggest fan or some stupidity like that if you keep writing like that.
And about the sequel and all... I think a good quantity of fangirls and similar beings will be interested in that, so do it girl! You're going to have lots of support.

(cries)
Ah, that was such a cute (and sad) ending, I loved it! ^_^
Yeah, do a sequel if you so want to, it'd be awesome!
You know, I've never been more glad you love writing the Blues/Rock pairing. ^-^

~Shadow

amazing as always. I'm pretty sure hikari-hakase would rather have an alive, gay son than a dead one. he definately seems to be that type of father. I like how saito's talk is with hikari-hakase instead of netto. it adds a level of seriousness and love and understanding and compassion that I think wouldn't be there if saito told this to netto. I love how you had blues save saito and how enzan was kind of put off about the whole situation and maybe he's a tad jealous? I can't wait to see what you're going to put for the next chapter. it should be just as amazing as these last few chapters.
p.s. wrong story for this review, I know but sorry because it's not working for my right now, but for ch. 14 of stages: *cheers* yes!! my absolute favorite character is in the story now and I'm soo excited to see what's going to happen now. (dark rockman is my favorite character by the way) axl's innocence just shines in this chapter! he's so trusting after he learns that kuro and kage aren't strangers. also, cool name for the prison blues and rockman are in. I love how kage convinced kuro to help take care of axl. and the way kuro talks is soo like him!! and I love the last part of the chapter when you said that they will be together for an undetermined amount of time. I simply cannot wait to see what fun adventures blues, rockman, axl, kuro, kage, netto, enzan, etc. will get into! yay dark rockman! (and everyone else XD)

You almost gave me a heart attack.

For a sec, when Saito asks when his relationship with Blues changed, I thought it was for the worst. I thought another time gap had occurred, and Blues didn't care for him anymore for whatever reason.

Thank GOD that's not true! :) Phew!

Now, it's know that Enzan is mature and intelligent, if not a little too cold hearted, but how exactly did he notice Saito's feelings if he is somewhat imperceptive to emotion to begin with? His irritation is understandable, but geez, I have to admit the chapter almost made me wanna smack the guy and tell Netto to find someone else. :O

That said, what happened to make Yuuichiro notice? Okay, granted, Saito is his SON but still...he could have hid his secret better if he really wanted to...I guess.

I feel so bad for Saito, so sick, sad, and possibly rejected. :(
I agree, though, that his father would rather him alive and gay. For some reason though, I don't see him being Christian...but that's just me.

Ah, the final chapter will be upon us soon! And then all shall be revealed and you'll probs get an even LONGER review from me. Honestly, I don't know where these things come from. :D

Well, until next time,
~TB

wow...what a brilliant story! update soon please! oh, i can't wait to read the next chapter...

This was quite interesting, lemme tell you.
First off, I'm a little lazy, so I don't think I'll be able to tell you all the things I wanted to tell you about this chapter.
Whatever scene you erased, it couldn't tell. You certainly achieved the effect you desired, so well done. I think you perception of the importance of "touch" in this relationship is rather accurate, too, so kudos! It's progressing well.
Of course, after reading Stages, it's really hard for me to think Blues doesn't have sexual urges. (LOL)
You aren't going to fast at all! This is well paced, and obviously there are going to be some time gaps because the story is so short.
If here was one thing I'd ask you to change, it's the line "It was a dark and dreary day, fit for a ghost novel or a classic horror flick." You proceed to describe the day very vividly and creatively, but the first sentence kind of ruins the effect.
Anyway, by now You know I like this and your writing in gen. :)

Til next chapter,
~TB

Be assured now by this review that I was indeed, in fact, following this story.
Agh, colds seem to be flying all over the place! 0.0
Hope you get better soon.
Agh, such an awesome chapter! You definitely have to update soon.
...but not before finishing Stages. ^-^ (that IS the title, right? I get it mixed up with another story name a lot ^_^U)

~Shadow

Uwah, new chapter!

Mm, I like that this isn't going the way I'd have expected, and I also like that things aren't going all Saito's way, if that makes sense? I love the rainy-day imagery here, too, and that Saito's frustration (lol) is expressed in such a *young* way. I think I'd like to see more of Netto's outlook or role in the whole situation? The section with the nurse struck me as a little OTT, but my attention was totally (predictably!) on the interaction between Blues and Rockman/Saito anyway, which was adorable.

“Rockman? Is it Rockman, now? Netto!”

For a second I was like 'What?' and then I remembered the awesome nickname. :)
I believe since your story is only going to be five chapters, and makes perfect sense to have them be long time friends. Not to mention, the idea is so kawaii~
This story is beginning to grow on me, I must say. Saito still seems like a person altogether different though...I keep having to remind myself Megaman, megaman, megaman... (I switch between the english & japanese names sometimes)
Yet, I like the little relationship these two have. I'm just curious as to how it developed. After all, Netto and Enzan wouldn't have had a rivaling relationship right? So how did they meet?
Anyway, I will definitely keep following this, and looking forward to the next chapter!

~TB

Okay, now that I've (mostly) recovered from my initial flailing 'E!' reaction - that was a really adorable scene between Saito and Blues (and Netto is just as adorable with his charms and so on, aw), and I like the way the journal bit at the start of the chapter tempers the sweetness. Saito has heart troubles one way or another, huh?