Yes Alan, i actually read this...i'm just a very fast reader. It was good, and amused my sick sense of humor.

OK WHAT IS WITH ALL THE R! I AM SURPRISED THERE IS NO NC-17! TRY WRITING A FEW MORE PG K? IT MIGHT HELP YOU A LITTLE! NOW I AM LEAVING CAUSE PEOPLE LIKE YOU SCARE ME!

Dear Dude:

Did that one guy who flamed this one read a different story or what? Granted, The first part of the story was a little slow and most of the characters seemed to be there just to do their specific power and move into the background, but the second part showed some of the most talent that I've seen in ages. Keep up the good work!

Too bad that changing the title didn't change the story and... oh, I don't know... make it good!

I never thought anyone could make me long for the days of TMK and that V.4 crap, but man...

you did! You shouldn't quit your day job that's for sure.

How long till you give yourself a good review for this one like you did on the others Tom?

Do you think everyone is as stupid as you?