I'm crying. I'm really crying. This is story is just perfect. From Marni and Nathan's relationship, to Nathan's anguish, to his reaction to Shilo, everything is amazing. Bravi!

Wow, this was so beautifully written. You definitely got Nathan's agony over Marni's death in character, and also his intense worry and protectiveness that I'm sure he felt before she died. This was just so heartbreaking, but beautiful. I loved it! :D

This is a stunning portrayal of Nathan & Marni, I love it. I hope to see more Repo! fanfiction from you.

oh my god.
oh my god.
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ohmygod.
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD.
The emotion was so good in this... gahd. Nathan makes me cry~
Good job writing for Marni as well. I always imagined her having a personality similar to Shilo's. I'm not sure if you meant to do that, but it's great. :)

Wow...I have nothing to say except...that this is amazing. I love it so much...I love the detail, the emotion...everything. I'm in awe! *claps insanly* Great job!

holy freaking crap forest water! this is amazing! i'm tearing up! you captured nathan perfectly and, seeing as you never really see what marni's personality is you captured her really well too! i say this is your best work yet.

Aw, I love Nathan so much!! Amazing story! Can't wait for your next Repo tale...

Yay it's up! Ok, you already know I love this story...it's so great! I love how you portray Marni even though fans of the movie barely know her...greatness!

I have no word for this, I mean... I am absolutely speechless... It is that good. Continue please! I can't wait for the next chapter if there's going to be one. Maybe when Nathan tells Mag... I can't wait!

Nice... The death made me cringe a little. So much blood...and vomit...and screaming... How's that to give you nightmares.

Ew..this fic is so sweet.Brilliant writing.
Keep it coming!

I really like Marni's character, how she's so passionate even though she's like... dying. I don't know if I'll have time to read part two before it's bed time.
I also really like the last line. It's a very good ending for the chapter. I'm terrible at ending chapters. Ending story's I'm okay with, but chapters are bad.

This is amazing, Forestwater. :D