 snapeangel 2009-11-15 . chapter 12great story so far
hope for an update soon! |
 Fallen-Petals15 2009-11-09 . chapter 12An interesting twist, I look forward to reading more :) |
 Griffin Raven 2009-07-26 . chapter 12Great story. Absolutely love the bumpy journey that Harry began on to discover who his real father was, instead of James. I loved all the twist and turns involved, the meeting with the vampires and Severus' brother. Severus, Remus and Harry getting separated..somehow I think it was meant to happen, and finally meeting Severus' mother and father. Well, I must admit I didn't expect Albus to be Severus' father. I can't wait to read what happens to the rest of the death nibblers (Ops...that what the death eaters were nicknamed in im100HPGWandRWHG story "Harry Potter and the Unexpected Visitor", guess it stuck!!). I would like to think that Harry will want to join the family; I mean a grandfather (Albus), a father (Severus) alive...it seems to be one thing Harry's always wanted..a family. Or more likely family who will love and care for him. Whether Harry can reconcile that with his identity been hidden for 15 years, being lied to about his parents...will be interesting to see? Once again, brilliant story!! |
 Jules-foil 2009-07-22 . chapter 7Charlie? |
 Flying Chrissy 2009-07-04 . chapter 12Interesting, looking forward to the next update !! |
 Makurayami Ookami 2009-07-03 . chapter 12well written. that all makes sense now. hehe. at least you put up with all my ?'s. night now. |
 Elfwyn 2009-07-02 . chapter 11Awesome story. Poor Harry always kept in the dark and then shocked to death. Good thing he doesn't have a heart condition! lol |
 Makurayami Ookami 2009-07-02 . chapter 11well written. she is creepy. hehe. |
 lady.edgecombe 2009-07-01 . chapter 11Yeah! You didn't abondon it. I was so excited to see an update. Hope to see more. Keep up the good work. |
 ThEgoLdEnCoMpAsS 2009-06-30 . chapter 10Love your story! I hope you post soon! |
 loretta537 2009-06-17 . chapter 10this is an interesting story |
 Makurayami Ookami 2009-06-04 . chapter 10blink blink. well that was unexpected. but isn't he the one who sent them on this in the first place. well written. |
 fangirl-friend2 2009-06-02 . chapter 10FInally an update! :D |
 LickleCrazyTwinkleToes 2009-04-28 . chapter 1This story is
PATHETIC
your characters are stiff and fake and the grammar and punctuation is painful.
Please stop destroying any good that is left in the Harry Potter books - they are bad enough as it is! |
 Makurayami Ookami 2009-04-27 . chapter 9well written. i liked it. i had wondered why she didn't kill tom but that explains. poor harry never has an easy life. well done. |