Some of the imagery in this is very pretty, especially the ice and the silver. Interesting short piece; I don't remember much about Janos' story, but this was fascinating. I think your writing's improved in the years since then, though. :P

*snores at the sheer stupidity of this fic* Pretty lame, hon.

Very deep. It somewhat holds a dark perspective in the mind of Janos. Nice work! _

That was a really moving fic. You really did express just how lonely it must be for Janos to spend centuries isolated in his retreat. Poor guy...but a great little story!

That's really good. By the way, there is a chibi Janos?

*hugz poor Janos n gives him a big box o chocolates* He needs them. Good work Nemi.

*high-fives Nemi* I like your take on Janos. _ I too think he was tired of living.

*fights the tears, fights the tears HARD* Man... this... damn it was beautiful! It was just so... I don't know... hell, it was JANOS. And Janos is beautiful, and he runs through this fic... *is making no sense whatsoever* Um... man! *is also speechless* It's just WONDERFUL, Nemi, you did an *excellent* job. _ You should write more! *grins and bounces off on a Janos high*

The thing that struck me about this story was how well you express Janos' emotions. I hope the next chapyter comes soon, because it is interesting to read about this man. More please! :D

That was good, I liked it. Keep it up :)

All hail the non-Mary Sue fics! Nemi, this has to be the most original piece in the LoK section to date. For that, I salute you! *saultes* _

I like the added details, Nemi; this is better than the version you mailed me. I'm also glad some is writing about Janos. Hey - you have ideas about the Air Forge; maybe you should write about that, too?