That was deep.

You overlooked some of the important aspect of Tommy's character by simply saying "Oh yeah, he has a good heart." The more important part is his passion, his will to protect and the determination to get into the possition where he can make a difference. How he looks out for others and makes tham stronger in turn.

Anyway, I liked this. It was a nice analysis of each member of the group. It was well worth reading. You did a great job. Now I'm the jealous one. I wish I could think and write like this.

Not really much of a Lori fan, but this was a pretty cool fic;)

that was really good. i love the way you put it in story form, its really awesome. i never really looked at Lori that was before... you are very observant. it was very deep, and very good. keep up the good work!