This story is really interesting, and its got a great rhythm to it. I hope you update cuz this story is extremely interesting, and i think you should post it in the other superman categories to get further reviews.

Okay, this is building nicely -- great variation on the characters and the situation. PLEASE don't make us wait so long for the next update!

Seriously -- I like what you're doing with Clark; the attitudes and thought processes are spot on for someone who's been hiding who he is and "burying his light under a bushel", and who isn't used to "big city" life.

Great story so far, really looking forward to the rest :)

Really interesting idea, and nice setup. I really hope you intend to finish this, because I'm hooked!

Please update!

This is a FASCINATING take on it -- I'd love to see where you're going with it. So far, all I see is a bunch of internalized angst.

I really am looking forward both to more of the back story, which I'm sure you've built thoroughly, and to seeing how Clark's character differs because of the difference in development. Do I assume the Kents here don't KNOW his background, or just never told HIM?

Bad Aliens as a reason to scare Clark from going public is very convincing. What now? They'd update Lois and Clark - only to find out that Kryptonian is more than they can chew?
Please update!

Nice idea, to use these strange aliens to scare Clark so much. I'd certainly like to know what you're planning after this interesting first chapter. Keep writing!