okay that was so sweet. it's like that sence in harry potter 6 , when ron says"hermione"whne he's oucold

I like how you captured his thoughts as this continuous stream of conscious, coherent, yet not, at the same time. I'm a bit confused as to the setting, but I suppose I should go read Gone Grey to understand. Very nice.

That was really, really good! 8D

one edit:
you used "possesion" twice in the same sentance, & it sounds awekward.

but that was nice. it was sweet & very confused-seamus. :)

Good story. I dig how Seamus associated all those colors with Lavender.

Very head injury, and very man. It's portrayed perfectly.

Very, very good. Now I have to read Gone Grey.

Aw dis woz sweet

Another lovely installment to their story... I agree, it sits better on it's own--both more stirring that way. Very nice.

beautiful imagery, Seamus is quite the poet! and I loved Lavender and the 'love you'. great writing.

Very lovely!

Hello!

I realise I haven't reviewed you in absolutely ages... I've just not had time to keep up with, well, any of my fics...

I did like this one though :). Yes, I'm still a Seamus/Lavender before all. It was cute... I'm going to read Gone Grey now, I reckon :D

-Miriamimus

very sweet. I really like the Seamus/Lavender pairing. excellent work.

That was so touching and sweet. You captured Seamus on the very verge of consciousness, and wrote in such a fluid, SOC prose that it really flowed well with his head injuries, how this thoughts might have been jumbled and structured (or in this case, unstructured). And his thoughts about Lavender, about how she's every color and not just a bruise--really truly gorgeous. Love the personality that you've crafted around her.

Great work.

so suppose this a one-shot, well I usually don't like one-shots but i rather like this one.

good job!