You have writen this
"The capped regular lowered his cap while mumbling"
but how can he have a cap on when atobe,kabaji found it in the hall before vanishing.also Tezuka and Fuji also saw his cap also in the hall.
So how is it possible?

That was definitely the best horror story I've ever read!

OMG OMG OMG I really love this story! XD
I just knew they couldn't die. XD
Great job!

Nice! Lolz! I love ur story!! XD

That was so cool! :3 This would make an awesome movie. x3

aw. that was so sweet of her. but i forgot what was in the book to begin with? and why take it with them?

Awesome story and ending!^^

I love you and your story. Chapter 16 & 17 were great. I hope the guys are alright. Snakes creep me out, I'd hate to have to face Human snakes. I look forward to your next update.

OMG! XD Update son!!

OMG...Human snakes!? And Yoshiro is a freak! I mean...what the hell...Update soon!

aw~ much more of heartattacks! human snakes! ha, got that! this is getting interesting... please, update soon! great chap!

~zephirus

omg suspensful. really though might be just me cuae i get scared eaily in hooror novels. XD nice opening thoguh. really capitavating

Wow, another great chapter. You must love leaving us with cliff hangers. I hope Shishido is alright. Not to mention Atobe and Kabaji. I hope we find out what happend to the rest of the guys who were looking for Shishido. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Nice update. Really creepy...(Dun Dun Dun DUN! Joke:)) Update soon!^^

yoshiro backwards is orishoy right? so yoshiro is orishoy...