Respect. Much respect.

I am just a tad bit skeptical on how you tagged this story, not to say as to how could Itachi ever be fitted in.

But if I could ever just say something that is wrong, it is in the first chapter. It does not remotely do the story justice or what might it even prelude to, making the reader abandon read if not only to see the reason behind the review:word count ratio. The first chapter is the make it or break it part after overcoming the summary.

In all honesty the story was well executed other than the insane power boosts which I am not in any way against. If the story works, then it works, no matter the means it took. Almost most of your stories functions the same way if I recall. I just find it hard that someone (still) really puts effort and a lot of thinking on their part in a fandom such as Naruto. I thought it dwindled long ago.

You remind me of the author "Cal reflector" and a bit of "DigiFruit". The latter making a ton of plotholes that the reader couldn't care less as for the overall impact of the story more than makes up for it. The former writes just like you, only more sophisticated and realistically yet with less thrill. You yourself is a cut above the rest.

I really hope you don't abandon ANY of your stories, as I sense than many will be disappointed. But it is your choice after all. We can only pray. =)

More power!

I have two words for you... HOLY **! Wow!

This story rocks. I love it. I look forward to chapter 11. Holding the whole world hostage. Sweet deal.

I take back my earlier statement of brilliance. Clearly it does not do you justice. I do believe that you are on par with my favorite author on this site, a pity he doesn't write anymore, but I digress. You are at the very least equal to the three runners-up. I am curious, though, do you just write as it comes to you or do you plan through with outlines and such? The situational irony is killing me with cramp inducing laughter. Seriously.

Brilliant. You are brilliant. I have been laughing maniacally ever since reading the end of this chapter. Naruto being screwwed over by the shinigami and then having Madara chase after him... her... it... Good show, truly one of the most entertaining reads I have perused in quite a while.

Not bad! Only thing more id want from this story is for it to be updated more often.

Awesome! This is really cool. I like how Isane joined the Akatsuki and I understand how Naruto had to die but its so sad. Poor poor Naruto-kun. Hope to see more chapters soon! =D

FireNekoDemoness

i was really skeptical about this story for a long time. i usually stay away from fem naruto fics as a rule but after putting off reading this story since you first posted it i find that my preconceptions were wrong. i love the story so far. the politics as usual is different from most stories where they focus on physical battle so this one was different, and i like that. i look forward to continuing to read this story so please update this as soon as you can get the chance. anyways until next time

-The Don

I'm so interested...I was interested because of the ItafemNaru thing...but now i don't care how it turns out. It's so addicting.

wow. so awesome. and i loved the little snippet for the next chapter

I LOV DA STORYLINE! IT RULES!
I do, however, have 1 question:

Is dis still Itanaru? Cuz, I just don't see any at the moment. Is it goona come later or is da Itanaru topping gonna be erased?

when I first read this I hadn't watched Bleach but now that I have and for whatever reason decided to reread this, I noticed some of the Bleach elements in this story, such as Orihime's powers, Byakuya's sword and shikai attack though it was described here as a technique of the Mangekyo Sharingan.

got bored, decided to reread this fic...got to chapter 5 and I realized something that I guess I missed before.

I found it both ironic and humorous that Fugaku would be the one to think it impossible for a clan to betray it's village.

i have to admit that when i read your intro i was so close to pressing the back button but i thought just a little more and bye GODS am i glad this is gold "GOLD I TELL YOU". i love it so very different and yet on the money to the acuall story line too the last chapter is different but i look forward to when you update to see what you are up to, thanks so much.

nice psychology attack on the story writing look foward to the next. though how is this naruto & itachi?