well its good, but that had better not be the end!

that was... quite sudden actually. HA Erik must hav bn lyk wait... did he just... YAY

woop woop

Oreal

So it's been a while since this was finished, though I haven't reviewed until now because I've been in Paris practically living in l'Opéra Garnier. It is honestly the most beautiful building I've ever seen. Did you know they keep honey bees on the roof and trout in the "lake"? The crazy lighting makes for bad pictures, however.

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Anyway! This has been a beautiful story, and a breath of fresh air at that! It's not easy to take these characters out of their original universe, make them modern, and still make the story work. It was sweet, yet not unrealistically so. Major props. The ending did seem slightly abrupt, but if you only wanted ten chapters, I see the dilemma. Regardless, it has always been a delight to read. There is nothing that cheers me up like a good read! Thank you for the wonderful story, as always!

Yey! Very sweet. Erik finally gave in... Go Christine! :)

aw, complete already? dayyum. ah well, it was satisfying while it laster -sniffs-

Great! As always :) I loved it so much.

We-el, you STILL could have had it be "from birth" if you had some parents who either didn't believe in medical treatment or didn't believe in cosmetic medical procedures or perhaps held some very old-fashioned beliefs about what it "meant" and therefore not only denied him medical care but also believed him "marked by the devil" or some such. (Everyone thinks no one believes that anymore, but... well... I just have to say that everyone is sometimes wrong.) Whatever the case, it's fine either way you do it. I mean, it's not how he ended up that way that matters, is the relationship and the ending, right? (Though... in modern day most folks don't treat someone TOO badly on account of an accident or abuse, either... but again, no reason to obsess over details. It was a lovely story.

Love all your stuff. Always have, always will.

Oh, please don't leave it here. I'm really hoping to see more soon! And I can't wait for the next chapter in "Reluctantly Willing". ;)

Hm, I don't know... Yes they got together, that was the whole goal in my mind but the way you did it... it seemed so unfinished. Like you said at the ending review there were many loose strands of story left and also I felt as though the actual revealing moment wasn't as developed and detailed like I expected with your writing.

The unveiling of Erik's face was kind of suppose to be the climatic moment in their relationship but it seemed that Raoul's reaction was brushed over and, even though you had the "lip" moment, other than that Raoul's physical reactions to Erik's face (ie. touching, studying ect.) and thoughts were bare or not there. You had the beginning and the ending of that scene done well but that middle part was again, bare.

Though don't take this as though I don't like the story. It was cute and creative to put them in a modern era with modern problems, but it seemed like it was hastily done at the end. Well keep on writing, maybe if you also don't feel well about this you can add a sequel, another chapter or just redo this one. Up to you of course. Well hope your doing well and keep on writing! I still enjoy your work.

Well, while I'll admit it didn't give all of the details I may have hoped for, it did give enough. And it was a happy ending, smooches and all!

I love you. Really, I do. :D this was just amazing in every way, it captured all the humor and angst of the story in one swoop. :) if you don't post a continuation or a prologue I might have to hunt you down, but this really was a good way to end it. If you went any further it probably would have got angsty; am I right?

Warm fuzziez, you are the master of all thinks ER. ^_^

(P.S. I did read the latest Reluctantly Willing, but my Internet wouldn't let me review at the time... I should go back and try that again, huh?)

It's nice to get a sweet little ending to this story, are you going to do a one-shot sequel when you mentioned in your notes about already figuring something out to do with the ending?

Although it would be nice to see what's down the line for them in a years, 5 years, 10 years time kinda thing. It doesn't feel quite as necessary in this hospital-verse, possibly because there was always less extreme tension/angst between them than in the canon-verse.

Can't wait to see what you produce next!

aw! erik/raoul cuteness! who can ever resist that?

hehe... the convos they have are funny, and Erik's amusing :)

Christine is being odd, was she trying to persuade Erik raoul had a girlfriend? what would that achieve...

wonder what Phillipe's reaction would be if he found out what was happening :)

Erik knows, Raoul suspects, hristine knows, Phillipe thinks it's one-sided. hehe

Update soon *bats eyes*

Oreal

I love you :)
My grandma died of a brain tumor. :-\ I didn't see that coming. He's really rich, isn't he? :D he can have anything he wants :) and he wants Raoul, so that's what he's gonna get. ;)
I really do love your christine, she's awesome.

:( this can't end next chapter. I'm not ready to let go of my Dr. Raoul image. He's so dashing in a white coat. AW, he's Erik's white knight!! Christine must be the horse, because she's the one making things move forward :)

Sorry I'm late to review, things are crazy :P haha very nice, I'm extreamly interested in Erik's condition, and I have no clue what is going to happen next. :)

oh no, only one more chapter! But this has been a great story so far, and I do love the banter between these two. So until next time- ciao!