Jazz, in spite of his suspicious nature, seems to have found a kindred spirit in terms of music. Prowl is right on the effects of war too. Lots of cases can be found if you just read a bit of history.

I have to admit, though, that section before the omake confuses me. What exactly is happening there? Plus, was the 4th chapter updated?

I don't know what is happening Wednesday, but I shall wish you luck anyway, whatever it is. ^__^

That explains the ending of the last chapter. Not bad. Just watch the spelling errors.

After rereading chapters 3 & 4 (which was more amusing than the original, I might add), I was curious about where the rewrites or editings for the chapters are going to end.

Who is Skyfire's visitor!? :0

Oh, I can just picture Jazz's face as Starscream2 chatters on at him. Chuckled at the possible images.

Oh boy, I wonder who Skyfire saw. Evil Cliffhanger!

Poor Skyfire. I just wanna give him a hug! (or get Starscream to do it :)

Poor Skyfire. :(

this is a very intriging story. ( Im sorry, my spelling is a little off) I really hope that you continue with this story. You are a very good authoer with very well thought out ideas. I hope ot se more. Keep up the good work!

It almost seems to me you are setting up Starscream2 and Skyfire (and not in a bad way), although I could be wrong. Whether or not you are, however, it seems Skyfire is about to discover the minor deception Starscream2 played on him. At least he can tell Ratchet the visits were innocent. Poor Starscream2, all he wants is just to go home, and he's caught up in some prophecy.

Nice rewrite of the first chapter, by the way. Seems to fit a little better with what your story has become.

Amusing title, and most amusing chapter. I'm going to assume that the story of this meeting will not take long for others besides Jazz to find out? And I do feel bad for Skyfire, he is going to be hurt when he finds out he was lied to, even if for a good cause.

Where DID all those pairings come from? They're coming out of the woodwork.

Wonderful ending, this just keeps getting better. I'm assuming you like that particular set as a pairing? I've seen that 3-way one before, so it's not a biggie. Right now, the story still seems to be about Starscream, so I'd just leave it at that for now.

Starscream thinks they are all out of their friggin' minds.

Can't answer your question, sorry. But I must say, I found myself impressed with the chapter here. You really have gone another direction from what I expected, and Red Alert being linked to Starscream1 was something I didn't expect.

Poor Bluestreak. :P