|Reviews for Girl Child|
| BellaLove14 12/20/12 . chapter 5
I really like it.. Keep going!
| Loves books 1/27/10 . chapter 5
This is good! I want to read more. Update soon
| lepetiterose 11/3/09 . chapter 5
I've always been so intrigued by bree, I really hope you can continue with this story.
You write so well, and Bella is such a boring character, I want someone else to fall in love with our Edward,
| bellacitron 4/11/09 . chapter 5
I think the akwardness in this chapter hit the nail on the head. good job. Don't forget the numbers.
| bellacitron 4/11/09 . chapter 4
When writing, it looks alot better when you actual WRITE out the number. Otherwise it just looks sloppy and lazy.
BTW you you use the word huskily alot. When I think of a person's voice ageing, I think of it as weak, and somewhat pitiful. Most usualy, writers describe someone's face, or whole entire aura (posture, energy, ect.) as aged for a certain amount of years.
| bellacitron 4/11/09 . chapter 2
Where IS jacob, and why?
It's like in theater, you have to think in the mindset that the audience is stupid, and you have to lay every thing on the table, at least everything you want them to know at that very moment.
BTW its spelled:quileute
| bellacitron 4/11/09 . chapter 1
All in all, it's pretty good, but if I haden't read the sumery I wouldn't know what the hell you were talking about.
And it goes:
| XOurNewReligionX 4/10/09 . chapter 5
Tres Tres bien. Vair vair gut. I liked Bree's bit best :D
Ugh. Braces are still giving me hell and also guess what? OUR COMPUTER BROKE! See you back at school, mein petit copain.
| Fishy 4/10/09 . chapter 5
again lovin it. Its fantastic. Can't wait for more
| pelar 4/9/09 . chapter 5
OMG OMG OMG!
ps. pleas update soon
| pelar 4/9/09 . chapter 1
just read the first chap of your fic, loved it! can't wait to rd the others
| A is for Angel 4/8/09 . chapter 5
defintely cant wait for more;)
| I'm A Sucker For The Dead 4/8/09 . chapter 5
update soon lovin it :)
| sophiestarkid 4/8/09 . chapter 5
please carry on ;)
iloved it x
| A is for Angel 4/6/09 . chapter 4