There is but one word I can find in my vocab that can properly say how this story and probably your next will be.

EPIC!

...wow great story, loved it
the sequal sounds great, i'll definitley read.
i know i haven't given many reviews..if any, sorry. but i was because i didn't really see a point because no critisism would of mattered, this was spectacular.

well i don't want to waste your time further.
all the best
silentshadow55

This was a really cool chapter! Just like the fic you wrote for FFX, I love how you incorporate your own twists while still keeping some of the original story and dialogue. Keep it up!

whoa! Acrobatic Yuna,*imagining*! Cant wait 4 da awes0me sphere and Yuna get'n jealous chappy~ ;)

great work, i'm hooked, just like with the last story haha
can't wait for the next update

anyway all the best
silentshadow55

welcome back! Glad to see your updating again. Hope exams went well. Great emotion in this chapter, I like your version of Paine and can't wait to see where you take her.

Take all the time you need. This story is just like your last one. Good and too incredible to stop!

hm da first two paragraphs...i thought i'd read them from Janiqua's story,One Thousand Memory.. umm,no offense tho..are u copying? or are u Janiqua herself?

nicely done!

ENTER Leblanc! lol I can't wait to see how you put her in

Nice segue way to the beginning of Final Fantasy X-2. Nilus as an archer, have to say that was expected. The Nilus/Rikku moment caught me by surprise.

Well, your really capturing the new Yuna

**. Eternal calm my **! I got ** at how little time it took for the world to become endangered again!

a bit slow, but then again that's like that for the first chapter of a fanfic. Its understandable. Looking foward to the second chapter.