 Chromaggia 2009-12-18 . chapter 53I love how the Phelps twins are playing Pins and Needles. They're awesome. :D |
 muse of suffering 2009-12-17 . chapter 53I don't think that you'll offend anyone with the new chapter. However if a Reader does start getting, "Offended" They can stop looking at the story, and use the Back Button. It's not that hard for the person to click it. Unless their Illiterate on the Computer. XD
I'm very sorry that I didn't review the other chapter as well. I was glad that Amanda gave the Chosens the Hypnocil Medication. I hope it will help the little ones stay safe!
Pins N' Needles sound like they'll be an awesome addition, to the other group of Evil Chosens. I can't wait to see what you have planned, for the next chapter. ^^ |
 Chromaggia 2009-12-14 . chapter 52Ooh. Nice. |
 Chromaggia 2009-12-14 . chapter 51This was very realistic. I like how Fira didn't just go all sunshine and rainbows and like, "Oh, yes, you're right, Lep is amazing and I love him!" |
 Elena Hurley 2009-12-13 . chapter 52I always felt bad for Amanda. >< And holy shit, all of Freddy's alies are starting to scare the shit out of me! DX
I cant wait for the next chapter! ^^ |
 xDemolitionxLoverx 2009-12-07 . chapter 51lol! hormones! |
 Elena Hurley 2009-12-07 . chapter 51Lol, Fira is so hilarious when she gets freaked out. XD And just like Fira, I dont really know if I like the guy who asked me out on a date on friday. Having a boyfriend is too much pressure for me right now. ^^; |
 muse of suffering 2009-12-07 . chapter 51-sings- And, I can't fight this feeling, anymore!
Stop denying it,Fira...We know that you're in love with Lep, already. X'D Even though it was short, I loved it whenever Toffee shook his head at the ending. I know that he's also probably thinking, "COME ON, EVERYONE KNOWS THAT YOU'RE IN LOVE WITH LEP. I CAN EVEN SEE IT!" I can't wait to see the new chapter! |
 Chromaggia 2009-12-05 . chapter 50Ooh, I wonder how Tiffany feels about Fira and Lep. I already know how Chucky's going to react, but at this point Tiffany's an enigma. Nice.
Oh, if you're still taking suggestions, Edward Cullen should be a villian. Since he's misogynistic and thinks women/humans are stupid and such. That would be pretty awesome. |
 Elena Hurley 2009-12-03 . chapter 50OH, Fira loves Lep! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D XD Lol, awesome chapter! ^^ Sorry I havent been online at all a lot recently. ^^; |
 muse of suffering 2009-12-02 . chapter 50Aha, I think I know the reason why Flayre calls Rolf, "Mutt.," it's useed to describe a cross bred dog, and it's also used as a derogatory term! So, she's making fun of Rolf's Mixed Breed. I was very bored and looked up the term of mutt on an On-line dictionary. -shot for being a nerd-
Aww,Tiffany figured out that Fira's in love with Lep! *squeals* Maybe in the next chapter, Tiffany smiles after Fira blushes violently, shakes her head in disbelief at what her mom believes what's going on with her daughter, and Tiffany ends up telling her about meeting Chucky for the first time when they were still human, and denying falling in love with him, the very first time.
I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope that the new villians won't hurt anyone, though! |
 Chromaggia 2009-11-28 . chapter 49Great chapter. I liked Kat blowing up at Lesly by accident.
I think Pennywise from Stephen King's IT could be on Freddy's team. He's literally a demon, and preys on small children by shape-shifting into a clown to lure them in, and then their worst fear to kill them. |
 Elena Hurley 2009-11-28 . chapter 49I really love this chapter! ^^ Idc if it's short, i LOVE it! ^^ And wow, I cant believe your almost at chapter 50! :D |
 Raven Firestorm 2009-11-27 . chapter 49As usual, excellent work. |
 muse of suffering 2009-11-27 . chapter 49You missed the word, "him" whenever Tifrfany is shushing Jordan with a hug. Even though it's short, I thought it was awesome. =)
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