I'm likin' the whole cellphone thing.

Something's up with Cambria. It was very subtle, how you implied it. Nice.

One piece of advice I'd give you is to use italics instead of all capital letters.

Nancy is awesome. In everything she does.

I actually like Paris Hilton. She definitely has gained a thick skin through the years and doesn't BAW about people making fun of her. I admire her a little for that.

Flayre's pretty cool. I'm glad Lep refused her.

TELL THEM NANCY! HURRY! XD Lol, I loved this chapter, I love every chapter! ^^ Keep up the great work! :D I cant wait for the next chapter! ^^

LMAO, Lep made me laugh when he started acting like a smart ass toward the bar tender. The bar tender made me start laughing as well. "I'll wup you like a step chile!" And, I hope that Eddie and Heather and Angi will all be okay, whenever Roberto comes back. *Shuders*

I just thought of a scary scene...Roberto goes to Lesly's house, without her knowing, and nearly attacks Baby angi in her sleep. =(

'Falling Away From Me' by Korn: 99
'Alone I Break' by Korn:99
'Hate Me' by Blue October:99

I hope that Nancy can help all of the kids, and that Angi is safe with Lesly.=( The poor woman isn't having any luck with her grand children, and her own god children. Ha, I can't wait to see what Chucky and Eddie's conversation will be like, while drinking their beers. xD I'm nosy!

'Falling Away From Me' by Korn: 85
"Alone I break' by Korn:85
'Hate Me' by Blue October:85

Thank God Nancy is there to protect thje children! ^^ Nancy's my fav NoES character. :D Great chapter! I cant wait for the next one! *gives you hugs and cookies* XD

'Falling Away From Me': 45 :D

luv it just luv it!

Sorry that I haven't reviewed, yet. This week has been a bit hectic! But, I also think that Paris Hilton would make a wonderful Gizelle. =)

'Falling Away From Me' by Korn:44
'Alone I Break' by Korn:44
'Lying From You' by Linkin Park:44
'Hate Me' by Blue October: 44

Cant wait for the next chapter! ^^ And I hate Paris Hilton as well. *explodes in anger* XD lol, I hope to see Lep in Ireland! :D

Man, Flayer sounds like a complete Hooker, flirting with Lep and the rest of the Male Patrons in the bar. Oh, I just thought of a fuuny scene for the next chapter of Lucky Charmed. XD If you ever get the chance to watch Seed Of Chucky, there's a scene where ever Jennifer Tilly is trying to sleep with the Rapper and Director, Red Man, so she can get a scene in his movie about Virgin Mary. Tiffany becomes enraged at the actress's slutty behavior and tells her off, before Jennifer freaks out and and runs away.

Maybe whenever Tiffany meets Flayer, face to face, she becomes disgusted and angry at the chosen's provocative behavior. Like, maybe Flayer decides to flirt with Chucky, and Glen, and Eddie when Eddie and Heather come back to see their kids. Serena and Heather and Tiffany are NOT pleased with the Chosen's Firting.

Ha, Lep also reminded me of Chucky whenever he flipped off the Bar tender. Chucky did the same thing, to a stoner kid on Bride of chuckhy. It's one of my favorite scenes.

'Falling Away From Me' by Korn:22
'Alone I Break' by Korn:22
'Hate Me' by Blue October::20

Also, I squealed when Fira almost said, 'I love you' to Lep. "Broken" by Seether and Amy Lee also remind me of Lep and Fira.

First off:

'Iris': 11

'I hate Everything About You': 11

'Going Under': 11

AND, yeah. Okay, now to my REVIEW: Lep at a bar is just to funny! XD Lol, I can't wait for the next chapter! ^^ And I was actually thinking about writing a Leprechaun one=shot about how Lep felt when Bridget left him. I thought about that in school today. ^^ So, I might write it. :D

First of (so I dont forget), let meh vote:

'Had Enough': 12

I got obsessed with that song now. XD

And secondly, I agre with Heather: Poor Cambria! >< And I also agree with Heather, I hope Roberto gets what is coming to him. *starts laughing evily*

And lastly, I cant wait for the next chapter! ^^ and I too like the metophors you use. ^^ I love metophors. (did I spell that right? XD)

I'm liking the thing with the cellphone!