Hey I really like your story so far and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work

Briana

Update please?

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Please continue this story. I've read your others and really like your writing style. I'm all about the lemons, and since Bella's already PG, we missed the lemony goodness of how she got that way. Flashbacks please...

good start!

Moree please! I usually don't start incomplete fics because I am so impatient, and I don't want authors to feel rushed, but you sucked me in. And now I have to be patient! Dammit. ;) Thanks for writing. Can't wait for more.

I'm begging now... PLEASE WRITE MORE!

I don't know what you're worried about. This is very, very good. Real (and you know how I like that!), funny, and poignant. Off to read cha3!

Good chapter. Your character of Bella is real and strong, though she's scared.

just so you know..i tried commenting anonymously the first time you posted this and it wouldn't let me..so i signed up for ONLY because i wanted to review and say that i can't wait for more :) so post soon!

ok this story is emotional and amazing! i luv bellas reactions to edwards crap. seriously keep it up and i promise to keep reading!

RaWr KeLi

AMEN! You sound so much like me! I have never been skinny...yes at one time I was freaking hott and fit!...But never a size 6...more like a size 10-14 Now I am happily married and was originally overweight...but now that I am 5 months pregnant... and everything is right!

I love your boldness in this story...keep it up!

wow amazing cant wait to see what happens next!