DISCLAIMER: I AM A TOUGH CRITIC! i like it! i always like to step outside of the Cullen mind frame and read about a new character. it bothers me when people try to write a Cullen's thought down when we all know only SM can. i enjoy Sophia. i know that sounds wierd because she sort of hates herself, but she's an interesting character! i'd love to find out what happens in her life. i'll be awaiting an update!

~SilverBullet2theheart

Oh this is fantastic! I don't know why I've avoided reading this one for so long, but I shouldn't have. This is a great concept; you should definitely continue! Update!

Haha, okay, a few spelling errors throughout but not too bad. Never use the words "a tad bit" because they don't go like that because "tad" and "bit" pretty much mean the same thing. Say "a little bit" or just "a bit."

And yes this review is for all seven chapters; I'm not doing it just so you don't get as many reviews as me. I'm doing it because I read them all at once and I don't like to interrupt my reading by reviewing each individual chapter. And there wasn't too much wrong with any of them...

SO! Yeah, that's it. Bonus points in chapter one for the vocab word!

*~writer.philosopher

Nice. I love it! For to the realz. Keep up the good work

Paz,

Lacey =)

Oh! Write more, por favor. But try to make Nessie a bit more mature. I mean, she is a little bit of a genius.

Paz,

Lacey =)

Write more - loving it!

I'll admit, I was hesitant to click on this. I'm always wandering if I'm going to click on something I shouldn't be reading. But I think I can see where you're going with this and if God's the good guy then more power to ya.

Paz,

Lacey =)

That was interesting.Not bad!.Just...interesting.

I love it!