Keep going your going good.

GOOD

YAY UPDATE! Reptile has entered the story! Kind of. I liked the angsty moment there with Aleksandrya, it was well written. I liked how it was all emotional, but the fact that it was spoken in such terrible grammar kept it from being to heavy. Or maybe that's just me.

Anyway, update soon!

Did I get the first review? ERE KARISA! Exciting. Anyway, on to business.

My first point is this: you have this story labelled as being about Sonya and Reptile, but as far as I can tell, Reptile shows no signs of being in it. Que es esto?
My next point is that, while the story shows promise and certainly has potential (I'm a big fan of OC stories), there's no plot setup in the first chapter. While an immediate plot setup isn't necessary per se, I personally think it gives readers more reason to keep reading. It feels more like the story's going somewhere.

Although it's kind of difficult to judge by the first chapter, I'd say it seems to be pretty good so far. I plan to review on later chapters as well to kind of keep track of the story.

Until next chapter!

-Connor