"He's a human, you're a mermaid!" = brilliant. You're stories are both touching and hilarious. Perhaps too hilarious? Several times I've been unable to keep myself from laughing out load, understandably confusing the others in the library with me who think I'm writing an economics paper. On another note, I would encourage you to have others edit your stories before you publish them. There are many typing errors. I think this is what the beta program is for? I of course, would be happy to preview them, but regardless, I think it would be beneficial. Anyway, keep writing! You're fabulous at it!

hahahaha Magnus made a little mermaid reference! (Well, I think it was, I haven't seen the little mermaid in quite a few years ;D)

ok, so when i opened this story, i was hoping that it would be good, and when i finished it i was like 'DAMN that is god!' and then i realized that you had also written 'when you say forever' which is one of my favorite fanfics so...idk, i thought it was kind of funny...me and my strange humor.
loved it, adored it, love the couple to death,
LOVE YOUR WORK SO KEEP IT UP PLEASE!! *with hot fudge and cherries on top. and sprinkles. oh and marshmallows!*

ever since i finished city of glass i ahev been wanting to read a story like this. love it.

This was really well done! One of the best versions of this scenes I've read.
Plus, it has a Little Mermaid reference! That took me so long to figure out. I kept staring at the screen going "Where have I heard that?!"
Anyway, this was cute and adorable and amazing! ^_^

Aw...cute. ^_^ I concur with Jusmine (except I've read CoG). Excellent way of describing what happened between Alec and Magnus that drove Alec to kiss Magnus in the middle of all those Shadowhunters.

This is my favorite alec/mag in hall of accords fic ive read yet and that's high praise considering there's a million of them.

Nicely written! :D
Huge Alec/Magnus fan myself, and the story made me love them even more.

I love Alec and Magnus! that was good...looking for more noe:-)

I've seen this scene done a couple times, but I think that you nailed it better than all of the others. Well done. :)

Cute! x33

I'm looking for a good Alec/Magnus fanfic! This was just... gawh. x3

This was wonderful. I think that you kept all the characters very in character and that you did a great job. I only just finished City of Glass yesterday and this is the first fanfiction I've read about the series but definitly not the last!

yes. i have been waiting for someone to write this and i was hoping you would! great job!

That was great!
Alec and Magnus are freaking amazing. =] I loved the extended scene. It was very realistic. Lovely!
=]

-Liz

A-aw, that's so cutee :D
I really love all these scenes with Alec and Magnus, or where they mention each other ^^
Really great job!