Interesting, please update soon.

this was really funny for the first chapter and then i noticed that everyone acted like Gai and i was just too creeped out to read more...

haha this is pretty awesome. i kind of feel like Akuma should have been given Yamato because he acts a little like virgil but its your story, and i see nothing wrong with it. hope that you do update soon.

ps. i do also love kyubed. i guess this means im a fan. haha go figure.

Okay... let's see...

-OC that makes minimal sense in the setting
-Complete OOC induced BY OC
-OC that steals most, if not all, spotlight from canon characters
-OC that is related to the main character, or, in this case, a good chunk of the cast
-OC that serves as the plot exposition fairy
-OC that outdoes a main character in what they are best at
-OC that does not add to the dynamic of the existing characters, but reroutes every ounce of it through themselves
-Entire point of series turned on its head
-False advertisement of franchise (I've only seen ONE unique DMC concept referenced so far)

Yeah... not exactly a prize-winner, buddy, with the Gary Stu streak this story is running. The only clever innovation I saw was the explanation for why Mrs. Kurosaki and Ichigo were out in the rain that night. :/

Can you just skip the whole Don Kanonji thing it's not even that important also I want to see more Yuzu going demonic I wonder how that will end. Awsome story so far.

Better than the few other Bleach story I've glanced at, but then I don't care for Bleach. A bit dark though. Good work :-)

hmm i ca't wait till yuzu sees their mother. i wonder what akuma is doing? and what are they going to do to ichigo still?

I was wondering when I'd finally see some DMC crossover. For a second I thought Akuma was a more sadistic version of Hichigo... *Favs*

Hey man. Just started reading this and the first thing I gotta say is Akuma is in for a rude awakening. Since Ichigo is unlocking his powers earlier in your fic, it will rapidly become apparent that Ichigo isn't a "early bloomer" when it comes to spiritual power. It simply seems that way because he has so damn much of it!

One of the coolest scenes I imagined when the latest chapters came out is the scene where Ichigo emerges from Uhahara's training hole. Rather than simply having the mask, instead he is full blown, long hair and horns hollow form. How awesome would that be? Plus your Ichigo isn't as "noble" as canon. He would have no qualms about decimating his enemies as a hollow.

Other than that, I really want to see Yuzu and Karins spiritual powers. that and no doubt there is a trip to hell planned in the fututre.

woah. the ending was a little weird but this is really awsome.

For the love of God...STOP.

Stop writing new stories, Carrotglace, and finish your old ones! It's been years since you last touched 'Insertion', something that is immensely frustrating, as it seems that it's a mere handful of chapters away from being completed.

What the hell happened? And what about Gaijin? It's all well and good to see a prolific author, but not when he can't be bothered to FINISH.

Kyuubed is interesting enough, I suppose, and the Harry Potter story is tolerable, but this one...it's getting a little weird, to tell you the truth. It was funny at first, with this wonky demon brother, but now it's starting to get a little dark. Seriously - Yuzu not having problems killing someone? Ai ya...

Eugh - murderous prepubescents. Some people like that; I don't. That's fine, really - keep writing it. I just don't think I'll be reading more of it.

I'm happy to see another chapter of this out.

Great chapter!

Keep up the good work :)

Huh? So basically, this is a story where there Hanyous (Half-Demons). But wait, Isshin is actually a Shinigami, so wouldn't that make every one of them half-Shinigami and half-Youkai (Demon)? If so, that would mean that they do have business with with Shinigami anyway, but wait, if they're just accepting their Youkai sides, then it's really none of their business, but then again...XO Kuso, I can't make my mind up! Anyhow, I like this story a bit, even though it's a little dark, so update soon, ja ne.

Interesting so far. So, I wonder if Isshin is still a Shinigami in this storyline and if Ichigo's mom and/or Akuma know about it...

^_^ wow Ichi gone demon on us was kewl! Akuma is just becoming more of a jerk as time goes byXD i wonder what he's gonna do to Ichigo the next time they fight...