This is kinda confusing but it still draws you in. I don't really have any title suggestions. Update!

update soon. please.

It was interesting... I think Drent was a bit OOC and there were a lot of spelling mistakes. Other than that it was nice. :)

Keep writing! ^^

Alyx

It was pretty good...I think the name for an Eletian prince is Ari'Matiel... Sorry, I don't really have any suggestions for a good title...I'm not great at coming up with that kind of stuff...lol :D

There were some spelling and grammar mistakes. Do you have a beta? Getting one would be very helpful in fixing these little mistakes...

Keep writing! :)

Alyx

update soon. please.

hm...this sounds interesting, update soon!

update soon. please.

I'll vote on your poll but first i'd like to know, what is a shadowdancer and what is a bladesinger?

Wow, this is interesting...please continue with it!

update soon. Your story sounds interesting.

I am very interested to see where you take this. Just a few things. You have a few spelling/grammar errors that made it choppy to read through, but other than that, I can't wait to see what comes next. The elf appearing with the swords pointed at her in the stone room reminds me of Karigan's first Wild Ride into the thrown room :)

well, that was different. I can't wait to see where you are heading with this...

hm... a little bumpy, but i expect it will get better. i like your writing style and you have good grammar. keep going!