I like it! Lelouch and Suzaku are my OTP

cooool! i love suzaku and lelouch you should do an mpreg story if your into that kind of thing lol

i really love the smex scene, u guys r so good at writing it; i love the monologues between suzaku and lelouch over who should be top that just made me lol so much; i also love the friendship they had in this fic even though they just had sex and all, the feeling u invoked just made it so much better; the only thing that might be too ooc in my opinion is when lelouch palm suzaku in the classroom i don't how he done it but it would be hard to keep it hidden, and also doing in the classroom and not being discover and all that, otherwise it's good.

...The use of Japanese, although a bit choppy and some incorrect...

Was incredibly hot. Very, actually :x

[If only more fanfic writers for this pairing used that kink .]

O_O ich... ich liiiiebe... ich tink my brain be unfixxably... haaaannnnnnnshnagl... holy crap i actually had to wait before i could reveiw because my brain was numb. that. was. AMAZING! just, WOW.

*LOL* aww poor Suzaku got really embarassed! ;P

I loved this! Good job :)

I usually wait for two or three good stories before I subscribe, but this story is so awsome that you have made it on my list with just one story

ohh just one thing: Lelouch name can't be Rerouch in japanese becouse they can't pronounce the R. Well if you go to the whole history of it, Relouch is original name, but they could not pronounce it at all so in the anime you hear Lelouch. (you know like Rin & Ren Kagamine from Vocaloid became Lin and Len Kagamine)

meh it does't realy matter. amazing story BTW 3

Aww...So cute

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It reminds me too much of Emperor Wakamoto's "RRRULLRRRR UUUUUUUUUUUUU SSSSSHHHHUU" etc.

(did it work this time?)

I'm perfectly fine with most of the Japanese, but Japanifying Lelouch's name as Rurushu, although I know that's fairly how it's romanized, comes across as some serious Narm. It just reminds me of Emperor Wakamoto's "" to NOT totally take away from the sexiness of the Japanese language.

Also:

"Lelouch's mouth was torn from his nipples as Suzaku moved his body upward, feeling Lelouch's silky skin slide along his own, over his hardened abdomen and up higher, until their chests fused together; soft, tanned brown skin melting with pale one, like white cream pouring into an already milky latte."

To me, anything mentioning "torn" and "nipples" in the same sentence elicits the immediate response of, "OW." Suzaku's "hardened abdomen" is a little humorously confusing-"hardened" suggests former softness. The word "fuse" gives a different, rather creepy, image than what I'm hoping is supposed to be given; the latte simile only further confuses and creates an image in which Lelouch's body is actually mixing with Suzaku's. Actually, that last part of the sentences reminds me kind of of this

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I agree with another reviewer, that the angst was a little too sudden. Aside from that and some of the analogies, this was pretty good.

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*q* This was made of win.

Popcornlicious win.

...Hmmm, yummy.

that was good. dirty as all get out but awesome yes i did notice the difference but it wasnt a bad differenhce theuu sort of flowed together. also silly suzaku who wouldnt want to be will lelouch. hes sexy.

OMFG! I LOVED IT!3 sooooooooooo much XD

thats a good story!