i REALLY REALLY like the story so far and i cant wait to find out what happens next! i have a feeling that it's going to be a suspencful story.

Oh wow. That is so cool! A purple fox. She's cursed too!

lol. You did a great job keeping Shigure in character. That was funny when he starting dancing around when Tohru suggested that Riddle stay with them!

Hey there! You asked me to read your story, did you not? :D Well, I have to say, you have an interesting idea here so far. Riddle does sound like an interesting girl!

You haven't been writing too long, it sounds like. But, you get better the more you write the stories. It all begins with an idea. Then it grows from there. I read on your profile that you like to read. That's good! Go with that. The more you read, the more you are exposed to writing. The more exposed you are to written works, the better you could possibly get. But the trick is to work at it! You seem very creative. That's a very good thing. Being creative is very good for a writer to be. What would also be good for you to do, is try very hard to put yourself in your characters shoes, and try to feel what they feel. Then, you just write that feeling. It's kind of like journaling-only you're doing for or as someone else. I see potential here. I see potential with anyone who is willing to put forth the effort, do anything they can to get better, and really work at it. I'm into singing as well, and I tell other people at school who want to sing to just work at it! Potential and talent come from working for it. My sister draws. She's been doing it since she was in middle school. She's now a sophomore, and she's very close to be as good as a professional. If you really love something, work at it! And with time, you will see just how much better you can get. This is a very interesting idea for a story, as I've already said. You've planted the seed, and now you have to water it, and tend to it. Then with time it will grow. (I'm sorry. That must have sounded corny, lol. I'm just trying to make a point :D.)But if you have any questions, feel free to PM me, and I'll be glad to help!