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gaul1
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
good and interesting chapter, keep up the good work, byes
Like A Clockwork Orange
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
The idea of a Harry raised (practically, anyway) by Sybill Trelawney is sheer genius. Never in a million years would I have thought of something so freaking awesome.

"James would really be impressed at how you stay in character. You’re pranking the whole wizarding world, Harry. Don’t ever stop!”
LMAO. I feel so bad for Sirius and how completely delusional the poor bloke is.

And Colonel Sanders, there are no words. Epic Win.
Cheese lover Tobi
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
Great chapter, naked frolicking who doesnt love it!

I like how you did the task, something new is always awesome.
PeanutTree
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
This line: ""Hi!" Harry said screaming in Mermish." I died laughing. Oh goodness.
Linnorria
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
Wasn't Harry bad at Transfiguration? yet he used it so well during the Second Task... Or did something happen that I forgot about? Anyway, thanks for another interesting chapter.
madbrad
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
Goodness, I enjoy the various bits and pieces you mix into your stories. In this case the various prophecies all coming true, and the main plot of course, but also the various blended romantic/friendship angles. God help me, I'm such a pushover these days, but I really love those little bits of friendship or better. I really enjoyed Padma's thoughts in this story ... I'm glad she seems to be a sincere friend to the other two and not just a patronising observer ... although her 'logical' slant still might give me some cause for concern on that front. Still, this chapter seemed to have a lot more on Harry having some bona fide friends, and I liked that.

I really thought you might continue with the theme of having Hermione bash her head against the Harry Potter wild factor in each chapter, but she barely appeared in this one. Oh well, you gave us lots of her peers instead.

Luna, of course, you used wonderfully for the whacky humour. "removing her makeshift ear plugs" - heh. Although the Parvati/Lavender 'looking bad wet' crisis was a corker as well.

If Riddle truly had a body like a reptile's then he wouldn't have ears, would he? Still, I think it's a case of him just having some reptilian characteristics rather than going the whole hog.

So ... there was some naked frolicking, then?

Can you ask Harry to read some tea leaves for me?

Thank you very much for continuing your stories; there's so much to enjoy in them. I hope you have a good Thanksgiving weekend.
jdboss1
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I do love this story
demonicnargles
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
How nice to see another chapter in this story. I really enjoyed it, as I did the other before. Keep up the good work!

-demonicnargles
Holen-Snape
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
I am looking forward to what Umbridge will do in the new year. Love the story. thank you so much.
SiriusBlackIsGod
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
Loved this chapter!
Delrusant
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
so funny, how could you fin all these ideas and have the plot still advance in the right way ;-)
badkidoh
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
Another great chapter so update.
neodanmatter
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
naked frolicking, that had me chuckling for awhile...
Frozen Wolf13
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
...This had me giggling like a little school girl... we will never discuss this with anyone...
dogbertcarroll
2009-11-26 . chapter 4
Great chapter. Loved Harry acting like an actual teenage boy in his reasoning.
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