 BlackHmoob 2009-11-17 . chapter 7Aw...you have to finish this story too! Or update it. I absolutely adore it. XDD Please don't let anybody's criticism destroy your will to write. I love the way the story has turned, and your ability to keep the characters away from OOCness. Ah! Lovely story! Please keep writing! |
 alitablake 2009-11-12 . chapter 7This is wonderful. more more! lol Very very well written. |
 DreamIdol 2009-11-11 . chapter 7I loved every minute reading your fan fiction!! Its really funny and kept my attention the whole time. I couldnt stop reading... It totally made my day after a long slow hr of one of my college course I ended up reading it the whole time as the boring lecture continues in the background. LOL I finished it as soon as I got home which left me really happy. I was hoping there's going to be more of a continuation to this story. If there was I'd probably die happy that day whatever bad news comes around wouldnt really matter. If it wont that's ok too I truely enjoyed reading every word written in the story. There were some funny phrase I thought that could have been rephrased and made it funnier but it really doesnt matter the whole story was truelly amazing!! I'm ranting on and on probably about some pointless stuff making a really huge review that no wouldnt be read (just guessing) lol I should probably cut it here...I'm looking forward to reading more of the stories you wrote definitely going to be one of my favorite author. Keep up the great work!! take care... |
 GrnEydDvl 2009-11-04 . chapter 7Oh wow, this was so sweet. I loved them spilling their souls to each other and telling their innermost secrets. You could really feel the atmosphere in the room and the comfort Kyoko feels with him. I can't wait until the next chapter! Please update soon! |
 GrnEydDvl 2009-11-04 . chapter 6Wow, that was heavy. It was a really believable story though. At first I thought the woman was that talk who host, but making it her mother was so much more powerful. Really nice twist. |
 GrnEydDvl 2009-11-04 . chapter 5I really liked the part with Sho. It's about time the man realizes that he's lost. It's hard to feel bad for him, but you did a pretty good job with that too. It was very well written. I also really liked Ren's "didn't leave a mark" anger and how the president understood what that meant. This is so good it's making me squeal all over! |
 GrnEydDvl 2009-11-04 . chapter 4Oh dang, what an intense chapter. Hio rocks! I can't believe Ren snapped on stage! That's going to be tough for him, although, I think some women might find it unbearably adorable that he did it to protect Kyoko, so maybe it won't backfire quite as much. This story has me so excited! |
 GrnEydDvl 2009-11-04 . chapter 3Wow she's got a sharp tongue. I love watching Sho lose his cool! It's so justified. |
 GrnEydDvl 2009-11-04 . chapter 2I love the idea of her going out as Natsu. This chapter had me on edge the whole time. I also love that Ren and the other director are really the only ones who know what's going on. The word play in this was brilliant. You're a very talented writer. |
 GrnEydDvl 2009-11-04 . chapter 1This was by far the funniest thing I have read for a long time. I was laughing hysterically the whole time. I am eagerly off to read the rest :D |
 amythist7 2009-11-02 . chapter 7OMG such a cliff hanger but so good. Can't wait until you update :) |
 Tricey3.14 2009-10-28 . chapter 7Can't wait for the next one! |
 my name is paper YAH 2009-10-25 . chapter 7so who is the mistress?? |
 Bom hasamaki 2009-10-19 . chapter 7Gah! Happy belated birthday!
And really loving how the story's going! :D |
 P'tfami 2009-10-17 . chapter 2I've recently watched the series and read the manga. Right off the bat, your fic easily captures the zany wit, prima donna behaviour and general silliness of the original work. Nice to see Hio getting some much needed exposure. A very unlikely, vertically challenged, knight errant!
It'll be interesting to see your take on the story's progress esp. regarding hitherto untapped territories like Kyoka's relationship with her mother and the inevitable meeting with Shou's folks.
Looking forward to the next chapter. |