Manny,
Omg! When are you going to finish the tenth chapter? It's driving me crazy. I haven't been in school so I haven't even been able to get updates. Seriously, the last time I talked to you I thought you were almost done. Anyway, I shouldn't be complaining because you are probably just making it better. Oh, btw, I haven't been in school because I may or may not have mono. The blood results should be back tomorrow or Wednesday, but I sadly will be in school tomorrow. Good luck and happy writing. Lol
Emma

Manny,
Omg, I think I am really getting obsessed. This is not good. I know I promised you that I'd review this chapter, and I'm keeping good on that promise. Now you have to finish and type up the tenth chapter! It is seriously driving me crazy. You left so many things open. What happens to Jordan? When do they tell each other they love each other? Does Seth burn down the farm? What happens to the baby? God, Manny, you are driving me crazy with this waiting thing, but will you please stop apologizing? We know it takes you forever and you're sorry. We can just assume that you're sorry and leave it at that. Anyway GREAT chapter as usual, and now you have a stupid review!
Kady aka that girl from your math class

Well, I did it...well half of it. I'm telling you, no offense but I can only take so much of this mushy stuff before my stomach does flip flops. Anyway, three more great chapters. Can't wait to read the rest.

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! You so have to write more. OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! I'm sitting in my room pulling on the sleeves of my sweatshirt freaking out right now! I am such a freak. Turns out that you are too. I write things like this in my head, but I've never written them down before. This was so good. Your descriptions of Luke and Noah were like perfect. And I thought you said that this wasn't about gay couples. You had two in this one. Now I'm like scared to read your other stories. By the way, I've known you for like a month, right? I totally should have known that you had a sarcastic sense of humer..."name: that's for me to know and you not to" Really? I know your name. That doesn't mean I'm going to say it but I do. Anyway, you did a great job on this. It's totally corny, but, hey, that makes it good. I've never seen As the World Turns (or All my Children or whatever the heck it's called) but according to you, Luke and Noah are totally in love and not afraid to show it. Now you have me curious and praying that the guy who plays Luke is not gay because he is HOT! Ugh! Now you have me interested in soaps and I hate soaps. Great thanks. Talk to you in math.

You updated great story can't wait for the next chapter.

First off, I'm deeply sorry that you experienced a recent loss. That's tough, hang in there and let me know if you need anything. Second off, kick ** chapter! This was an amazing bonding chapter for Sam and Loah. I really liked delving into Sam's past a bit more. I look forward to seeing more of it! Fantastic job!

Cookies, where?! (You're a big boy now, SW, stop it!) Like I said before it was posted, this is an intense chapter. Noah and Sam could have a lot to bond about in terms of their crazy fathers.

On a more curious (possibly selfish) note, I can't wait to see what Seth and Maddie are up too.

So update, soon. You've got a lot of potential as a writer.

This is really good! I hope that you continue soon! I can't wait for more!

"Come on baby lets go shake our grove thang." ROFL! I loved that! Made me laugh so loud! :) Can't wait to keep reading!

hey, still loving the story! can't wait for the rest!

liveloud
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I've said it before and I'll say it again, you get better and better with each passing chapter. Seth's characterization is spot-on and the interplay with him and Maddie is great. I can really feel the love coming off of those two.

i liked it! well done! i dont mind waiting for a new chapter because i know its worth it!

liveloud
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Very nice. You managed to incorparate your own storyline with character history very well and I always like that.

The phrase "Queen out" is definately one for the books. So refreshingly un-PC since you used to describe Luke and Noah.

And did I mention how much I love the interactions between the two couples? If I didn't, I love it. Luke, much like Noah, is so nice to Sam. Loah's interactions with her dads is a lot fun to read.

The lack of Seth does not bother me at all, as you said that he would probably show up in chapter eight anyways. But, I've got to say one thing, the name "Meth" can be used to jokingly describe his and Maddie's relationship as he still has all that energy he did in UnNUKEly Musical. And, as they say on Family Guy, "Meth is one hell of a drug."

Anyways, I hope writer's block does not affect the next chapter. I've battled that ** before and he/she is meaner than a Twilight fangirl who was just told Rob Pattison is one ugly cuss.

I'm disappointed. I expected Noah to be more harsh on Sam. oh well. update!

Wow. You intense chapter but still carrying it's moments of comedy. And, may I say this as a compliment, you are really coming along as a writer. You were good at the very beginning of this story but it just keeps getting better and better.

I love how protective Noah was rolling into Sam's place and how honest he was with Sam about wanting to kick his **. Then he turned into protective papa again when he heard about Jordan. Good stuff, I really mean that.

I love the brief convo that Luke and Noah had about Seth. Luke's reaction is exactally what I would've written if someone on the farm suggested Seth look after the place.

Update soon because I wanna see what happens next.