 floire 9/9/11 . chapter 1ahaha that was darn good and hilarious ..i really love their family! um heloo! i heard that! :))
great great story!
pls. pls hope to read more nanofate fanfic..especially the family one!(_) |
 Ushiromae 1/24/10 . chapter 1Oh my goodness! Two family fluff filled fics in a row. I'm pretty sure I love you right now! :D The ending parts made me laugh much harder than a person should be allowed.
"Alicia wanted to know where baby's came from..."
Nanoha gasped than smiled.
"That's my girl!"
:3 So good. |
 Lance58 11/9/09 . chapter 1LOL hahahahaha she heard them |
 Ms. Chidori Sagara 5/13/09 . chapter 1I love it D I really love it 3 |
 kawaii-kitty101 5/1/09 . chapter 1lol kawaii as usual! |
 Kimon 4/10/09 . chapter 1 'The baby devil' and about Vivio knowing their telepathically lol..Anyway it's cute, thanks. |
 Aoishiro 4/7/09 . chapter 1Aww cute story :3 Ehehe, Vivio is known as 'The Baby Devil' XD; That's epic. And Alicia is just too cute . ; Great story! :D |
 setsuna.kobayashi 4/4/09 . chapter 1aww.. simply cute.. i love fluff.. fluff is god.. :3 |
 KillerQueen118 4/4/09 . chapter 1Ha ha that's funny. This is going to my favorites for sure. |
 Major Mike Powell III 4/4/09 . chapter 1Well, well, soldier...
Aw! THIS...was...A-D-O-Rable!
It was all one big-ass LOL. LOL
Nice work, marine!
Semper-Fi! Carry on! |
 NanoFate.us 4/3/09 . chapter 1Yay for happy family fluff!
This may be random, but it was great. And very cute, something from a normal day of they living as a family ends up being so heartwarming just by seeing their happiness
I think you made a nice choice for the scene, we usually don't see bath scenes, or at least not with such levels of fluffiness And it was also fun. Go baby Devil! ...lets hope that Alicia won't follow Nanoha's steps like Vivio xD
I hope to see more similar fics from you. Happy family love is always appreciated here, and this universe with little Alicia has a lot of potential for more great stories like this one |
 ALEXISSA2 4/3/09 . chapter 1Aww that was a really really cute story, I luv it. wishing it was longer but thanks for sharing. |
 purlz 4/3/09 . chapter 1This was really cute :D I especially liked Alicia talking in ancient German and only God could possibly understand. Awesome! Perfect start to my weekend!
Thanks Alavon and more power to BPHaru! |
 DreamShadower 4/3/09 . chapter 1LOL, that was funny. There is no such thing as "normal" at the Takamichi residence. XD
Ah Vivio, she really does take after Nanoha. Already eavesdropping on telepathic communications. :D
Nanoha the ever feared White devil, te Ace of Aces, but a fretful mother. Good thing she has fate. .
Yay for fluff stuff |
 Honulicious 4/3/09 . chapter 1so cute! i can't get enough of this family fluff. thanks for the comedy relief |