Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Search
Reviews for: Bath Time - Page 1 of 2
floire 9/9/11 . chapter 1
ahaha that was darn good and hilarious ..i really love their family! um heloo! i heard that! :))

great great story!

pls. pls hope to read more nanofate fanfic..especially the family one!(_)
Ushiromae 1/24/10 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness! Two family fluff filled fics in a row. I'm pretty sure I love you right now! :D The ending parts made me laugh much harder than a person should be allowed.

"Alicia wanted to know where baby's came from..."

Nanoha gasped than smiled.

"That's my girl!"

:3 So good.
Lance58 11/9/09 . chapter 1
LOL hahahahaha she heard them
Ms. Chidori Sagara 5/13/09 . chapter 1
I love it D I really love it 3
kawaii-kitty101 5/1/09 . chapter 1
lol kawaii as usual!
Kimon 4/10/09 . chapter 1
'The baby devil' and about Vivio knowing their telepathically lol..Anyway it's cute, thanks.
Aoishiro 4/7/09 . chapter 1
Aww cute story :3 Ehehe, Vivio is known as 'The Baby Devil' XD; That's epic. And Alicia is just too cute . ; Great story! :D
setsuna.kobayashi 4/4/09 . chapter 1
aww.. simply cute.. i love fluff.. fluff is god.. :3
KillerQueen118 4/4/09 . chapter 1
Ha ha that's funny. This is going to my favorites for sure.
Major Mike Powell III 4/4/09 . chapter 1
Well, well, soldier...

Aw! THIS...was...A-D-O-Rable!

It was all one big-ass LOL. LOL

Nice work, marine!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
NanoFate.us 4/3/09 . chapter 1
Yay for happy family fluff!

This may be random, but it was great. And very cute, something from a normal day of they living as a family ends up being so heartwarming just by seeing their happiness

I think you made a nice choice for the scene, we usually don't see bath scenes, or at least not with such levels of fluffiness And it was also fun. Go baby Devil! ...lets hope that Alicia won't follow Nanoha's steps like Vivio xD

I hope to see more similar fics from you. Happy family love is always appreciated here, and this universe with little Alicia has a lot of potential for more great stories like this one
ALEXISSA2 4/3/09 . chapter 1
Aww that was a really really cute story, I luv it. wishing it was longer but thanks for sharing.
purlz 4/3/09 . chapter 1
This was really cute :D I especially liked Alicia talking in ancient German and only God could possibly understand. Awesome! Perfect start to my weekend!

Thanks Alavon and more power to BPHaru!
DreamShadower 4/3/09 . chapter 1
LOL, that was funny. There is no such thing as "normal" at the Takamichi residence. XD

Ah Vivio, she really does take after Nanoha. Already eavesdropping on telepathic communications. :D

Nanoha the ever feared White devil, te Ace of Aces, but a fretful mother. Good thing she has fate. .

Yay for fluff stuff
Honulicious 4/3/09 . chapter 1
so cute! i can't get enough of this family fluff. thanks for the comedy relief
17 found: Page 1 2 Next »
Return to Top