Interesting. I like it, and the other one about Snap. I'd like to see more on her.

Priire,

It rocks! I love X Men. It was awesome!

I llloooovvveeee your story! It's one of the most well written ones I've read! R u going to write more? Keep writing!

Good start, but Snap is WAY too powerful. Beware of Mary-Sue-ism. We're all at risk, so don't feel bad.

I like. _ Write MOORREEE

Wow. This is good. After you finish, you should consider sending this to Marvel. Snap is one of the best characters to come around in a long time with a really decent power, one that hasn't been explored as of yet.