Yeah, when Kurapika popped up I dug my nails into my knee so hard it bled.
But...
Wa-slap! *slaps the computer screen and starts crying*
You didn't HAVE to kill him, you know...*sniffs loudly*
There was no reason to kill Kurapika, not when everything was going so well...
Jeez. Feitan sucks.

a very very good one.
i like how you have Kuroro said that "there are many who find utter despair attractive." and your plot of having the hopelessness and despair, creating the most of scarlet eyes.
that thought was incredibly awesome.
i like how you wrote Kuroro a lot. patient. and impatient but kept his cool.
i think Shalnark and Kurapika look alike too. besides from hair and eye's color, they even dressed almost the same.
poor Kuruta.
i hope you write more on HxH. i've seen you only written one?

Nice and interesting fic, and I'm reading just at Kupapika's birthday (Apr 4th sniff).
Oh my you placed Ryodan as one bloody troop, but well, they are like just like that.
Thanks, I enjoyed reading it. Bye.

I hate Kurapika. This was interesting.

Um, go Shalnark? Love him to death, the creepy little bugger. Great job. I love how nonchalant they are about the entire thing.