Ah! I'm sorry it took me so long to review this! I didn't even read it till today; curse this busy month of mine.

I thought this was the most gorgeous piece of MaxMariam I've seen in forever! I love the simple statement at the beginning and then the elaboration; it adds something special.

Mariam would, of course, go to see Max and they'd spend the whole time embracing in the doorway. XD They make such a sweet pair. I love how Max uses strawberry shampoo; just as sweet as him.

And it was Judy, I presume, that asked who was at the door. She would! I would hate/love to see what would happen if she found them together. Priceless. XD

I love how they seem so familiar with each other, but yet, they still notice little things like how his hair curls over his ears. This type of thing shows how truly in love they are.

Over all, a very well written piece; you put me to shame. XD Loved it! You're fantastic; keep it up!

i liked it and i'm glad you uploaded it =]
this is a really great piece

Um... I don't know, I might have already reviewed this =/
Anyway, I didn't find any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes or anything of that sort, and it was well-written. And you're right, any MaxMar must be uploaded immediately. Max gets ignored an awful lot :P

Do I really need to say amazing and romantic? Seems like something I've said before xD lol, fantastical work as always, like cheryy pie. God, randomness. Man I'm rambling lol.

Either way, LOVED it! bye bye :)

Ack! I love you for posting a Max and Mariam fic, no matter how short it is! I can't believe it's here! I'll send you a PM later but I had to be the first reviewer.

I love the story! I think it's really well written and very unique. I've never read anything like it for any other pairing of any other book/movie/show/etc. Wow. I can't even put it into words how much I love it... too bad it's a one shot. Haha.

Thanks for another story, the site desperatley needs one.