I must say, I was actually pleasantly surprised with the ending of this story! I had no idea where you were going with the Mendelian genetics thing until the end and then It was the light bulb. What a sweet, short story. ^_^ Very pleasant. Thank you for writing!

lol this is really cute. and with the way he follows him it's easy to see them being interested in each other. i wouldn't want to write a story for them though. i'd mess the names up SO bad. thank you it's such a cute read and Toki would set him up like that too with science. lol i would love it if you'd do another it's such a tiny fandom as is.


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Aww, this was really cute. And kinda funny.
The only thing I would suggest it that the italics (I'm presuming it was that at least) didn't work, and some words had i.../i attached to them which was a bit distracting.

A little suggestive, a lot cute and rather humourous. Congratulations on a brillant little oneshot

i loved it please post more tsuyukusa stories

Aw... cute. I see you have no reviews. DX Why must people ship typical pairings? Nice story.