little confused why there are still two more chapters
good story though

There need to be more Penelope fics. I love this.

This was amazing! Thank you so much.

this was really good. i loved it.

Holy crap i love this story! Such s cute movie and this seems like somthing that would happen to them.

The only thing that i could say is that the last two chapters could also be their own story, becuase it seemed like you ended the story with the last few lines of chapter 8. Its still really good as an ending for the sotry though.

This was a really sweet story and I enjoyed reading it. I love that Johnny wrote a song for Penelope. Their anniversary was so perfect.

Just one thing, the bar they frequent is called the Cloverdilly.

This was a great story. You wrote the characters and conversations very well. I loved the romantic scenes in there! It could've done with a little more dramatic tension - it sometimes seemed like the problems were solved too easily. I give it 4/5 stars! :D

This was a great story, I felt that I understood it in a way, but I really liked!

GOod Job!

:) :) :) :) :) :D :D :D :D :D I could do all day after reading that! It was so adorable! Amazing job on this story, I hope you write more fan fics for this fandom soon, there's not nearly enough!

Aww! Creative idea ma'am. I quites liked it. Especially since I could see Penelope taking care of him like that, and him trying to make everything perfect, ETC, ETC! ]

AHH! Ok party people how great was this chapter? *room full of people cheer like crazy* LOL, what an imragination I have. HA

ok, so I feaking loved it! Was there a better possible way you could have had Edward propose or Johnny find out how much he mean to Penelope? Nope!

WERE WHO? AHH!

Ok, so I am super happy that Lemon fixed everything, and I loved the cliffy (again feeling sorry for the people who had to wait) and I'm very stoked to see what's going to happen next!

OH NO! That was so sad and nerve wracking! I'd to leave a longer review, but I must read the next chapter! I feel very sorry for the people who had to wait!

hehehe, I loves Lemon. I can see him doing that too, and I liked that you stated that Edward isn't in love with her, so we won't be confused after!

Yay Annie! And Alice! I love Alice especially, thanks for putting her in the story. Her flashback was very sweet, but my favourite line had to be this one:

When everyone was off of the bus and filed back into the school, Penelope did one last head count only to find Alice missing. Then she felt a gentle tug on her sleeve.

The little girl beckoned to Penelope and then whispered something in her ear.

“I hope you do marry him. It’d be so romantic!”