R u going to update soon? I Luv this story. Good Job! :)

Awesome. Like I said, you're great at building suspense. I was looking forward to more Bob Buddy interaction, but it makes sense that you're exploring Bob and Helen's current relationship. You're building a really good foundation for the story. Their feelings towards one another seem very in character to me.

I like how conflicted you're making Bob in regards to Syndrome. It makes sense that he would kind of alternate between being angry and sympathetic. Syndrome has caused Bob a lot of problems, and he's continuing to cause them now...but I've also always thought that it would be hard for Bob to forget that at one point Buddy was just a little kid who wanted to help. Nice job on Bob's characterization overall. I really like your take on the character.

Thanks for updating! You're great at building suspense by the way. The interaction between Buddy and Mr. Incredible was very believable. You really have these characters down. I hope you update again soon, but I understand if you're having family problems. Sorry to hear about that.

This story seriously kicks ass.

I... am captivated. Immediately fascinated, instantly enthralled. More please?

i really like the story...you need to continue it!!

You should totally continue!
It's good!

I like your characterization of Bob. Most people write him as being really angry and hateful towards Syndrome, but I much prefer the idea of him having mixed feelings or maybe even feeling remorseful. I'm glad you're going in that direction. Even though I'm not a big fan of slash, Bob and Buddy are my favorite characters, so I'm definitely intrigued. Anyway this story is off to a really good start. I hope you continue.

write more.great job