love your story please update, i can't wait until the next chapter

i absolutely love this story

its so different from all the fanfictions ive read

you have an amazing writing style

cant wait for the next chapter!

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good chapter! are u still doing the next i realized its been a few months :( but i really love this story please do the next one . xxx

I really really like this. It's freakin awesome! Please, oh God please, don't stop there! Please update again soon for me! I don't think I could wait long for another chapter. Vince is begining to interest me, and I am really curious as to how Edward is a ghost. Oh, please update soon!

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I say, carry on with it flowing the way it is and see where we end up, I'm enjoying it thus far. I'm sorry my review is a little late, I've been busy and this is the first chance I've had, another really great chapter, I feel so bad for Jay and her unloving mother, not to mention Jeremy and his homicidal follower, real bad times. It was nice to see Vince doing something halfway decent in this chapter, even if he was still being a large arse still, but it shows a steady charecter progression which is definetly good and I kind of like him as a bit of a jerk, it adds to his appeal. Ah Edward returneth, bearing bad news too, what will the murderous Brandon do to Jay, will she need help and will she get away okay? I cant wait to find out. I spotted one error, 'I glanced at the ghost you seemed to be stuck' would be this, its only a little mistake, I think you mean 'who' and not 'you', its not important but I thought I'd point it out. Great work, still loving it, cant wait for more! :) x

Hi again, another great chapter, I'm liking the Jeremey/creep ghost thing, its nice for Jay to have other mediator issues other than Edward and for him to maybe see her in action so he might possibly let her help him. Great, Jay has now found out about Bella and Edward from the newspapers and knows enough to do a bit of digging about that, she even has Jacob's name as well, should be good. Argh, poor Jay and her evil witch mother and the hidious clothes she wanted her to wear, I wonder how Jeremey's family is connected to Jay's and why the creep ghost is stalking him. Great chapter, I cant wait for more! :) x

Whoop, me still likie, it's good. lol Vince and his creepy/jelous/cute ways, I liked how you introduced Jay's Forks friends again and loved the chapter in general, though truth be told I dont remember the old chap three exactly, I can definetly tell that the gist is different. anywho, like I said, I'm still loving this and I cant wait for more, I appologise profoundly that the reveiw is a tad late, I've been minorly busy but what a bad case of cba, never a good combo, anywho, well done I liked it a whole lot! :) x

Hi, yeah even though the changes arent major I still like this new altered chapter one, it read well and I enjoyed it. I'm behind you with this and I promise not to abandon you in the wake of your renervations, I'll carry on reviewing and tell you what I think to your changes. so far so good, like I said I really like it, its stating off as a very clean and seamless mesh of the two stories and I adore it, great work here! :) x

i hope you finish

Okay hon, hope to see it soon :) x

OMG I KNOW ITS SO SAD! life without mj looks crap already! ARGH! BTW awesome story! now hurry up with the next chapter! my premonition tells me that Jay is related to edward! and she finds this out when her father send her the family tree mentioned in chapt 10! awe i heart this story! vince is so sweet! x.x.x. Fexie3

Awesome story! :]

Update soon,

Kolored.

coolio please update soon!

good luck on your tests... I've been there and it's not quite that pretty when you're all stressed out... relax and good luck!

Dont worry about it, I compleatly understand how you feel, I've just finished my A Level first year and those exams really stressed me out, I havent been updating on my own story reguly because of them so I understand how you feel. Good luck in your exams. :)

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