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| Reviews for Simon's return |
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  atgirl 2/24/12 . chapter 4 Please continue this story? I beg you. I really like it. |
 WhitePheonix24 1/28/11 . chapter 1Wow... That was awesome! Totally enjoyed the time I spent reading this! |
| TurtleWexler 12/27/10 . chapter 4 I really like this-I really do!-but I think you're having issues with point of view. Mostly keeping it in one tense-most of it is past, but some sounds like present, especially in chapter one. And "brang" should be "brought", "clang" should be "clung". No offense or anything, just thought you ought to know. And if you were going to bring Simon back, you could've made him human (meaning normal-colored hair). just a thought. That way he wouldn't want to go again. |
| kakashifan1792 11/4/10 . chapter 4 PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! You have to write more! This is what I wanted to happen in the story. Well, maybe no exactly but still, thanks for writing it! _ |
| M 10/13/10 . chapter 4 YYYYYYYAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY! Simon's back! i was so mad when he died! this story is a dream come true! hurry up and write more! |
| GreenEyedGleek 10/9/10 . chapter 4 oh! i just loved it! |
| blood.ooka 9/17/10 . chapter 1 Sorry for making you feel bad! T.T I swear it was the evil lady character of yours! Lol Just kidding. Good story. - I love Simon's character and this was a touching (kinda scary O_O) story. Good job! |
| Tierney 7/3/10 . chapter 4 I really like it but you haven't written on it in a awhile but I'd like to see what you were gonna do with this story. |
| Mr. Alexander Sterling 7/1/10 . chapter 4 update soon already ahha great story!] |
| creation 6/8/10 . chapter 1 loved how u told diz story |
| Effie 5/8/10 . chapter 4 i LOVED it! please update soon!:) |
| austentwilightfan92 3/9/10 . chapter 4 Thank you for bringing Simon back:) |
| Jessi96 2/28/10 . chapter 4 omg please write more! you know...actually you could send this to the author and when you finish the book if you send it, you could get it published! it's really good and could be a second book to the first one! i mean seriously! btw plz write more! lol bye! |
| Kelsey-Short 2/19/10 . chapter 4 seriously! review like soon! |
| Kelsey-Short 2/14/10 . chapter 1 OMG! i loved it! okay so read the book and absolutely hated the end! they couldn't just leave it at that and thanks to you it isn't left like that now... THANK YOU! that really was great though! you should do something like time is running out or his brother shows up again or some twist like that! i am posting some of my own written stories (all original) but over some books too... so if have any ideas well... i am all ears! |
