It was incredibly confusing, but still comedic. Good job.

I loved it, i loved the way you put 'The Lie That Ruined Everything' and the thought of the younger Artemis catching them...actually...fic idea!! hehe. Can you write a second chapter. pwease?

WAT IS IT?!
WAT IS IT?!?
WAT IS IT?!?!?!

Two words:
Love this!

You would almost expect a sort of normality when you yourself have time traveled and walk in on a pair of time travelers. Once you've jumped through time on a couple of occasions, it must get routine. haha

*looks guilty* okay, i can't help it. i keep stumbling across this oneshot on people's faves, and i gotta reread it...

*claps hands* brilliant! ^^,
brittney

*smirks* artemis could sell ice to the eskimos. what if the mission was to indirectly get the past him and Holly together? seeing as the present duo decided that cuddling on the damn couch won't kill them, i'd say it was successful... *cheeky grin*

brittney

What was the mission?

And HOORAY! Arty hates Twilight! Even if it's Fanon!Arty. Every small victory ^^

Reply, if you do, with the PM function, I can't get review replies for some reason.

...8D? I'm confused. Future Artemis? BUT, I'm commenting on your profile, rather than your story.

Because seeing your words on Rick Mercer reminded me that *you* are Canadian. (You're the only person out of the States who I have even the slightest amount of familiarity with, to be honest. D:) And I was wondering if you might explain how your voting process works? *shot* I read the wikipedia article (in Wikipedia I trust), but I was very confused.

*cough* And a brief rundown on your political parties, or why you're a liberal would be cool as well, if you're not offended by the questions. *shot again*

If you are, forget I asked. D; I'll just keep reading your stories and stay out of your personal business.

Yeah... that'd just be a LITTLE awkward.

Hooray for awkward A/H moments! Hooray for awkward A/H with unrepentant shagging!

That was the funniest AF piece I've read since Blame Minerva... hm, I wonder who wrote that one...? ;)

Oh, and as to why they would be having sex during a mission: if the world has learned anything from James Bond, it's that you have sex on a mission. It is mandatory. In fact, I believe the ratio of danger to sex is a direct proportion when a story is between the ranges of teen action flick and disaster/tragedy.

-GMontag

ooh, i love this one!

what was the mission??

...still, i'm confused. shouldn't the older artemis, who was in the bed with holly, knew, that his younger one would come around to get that bag, because he had been the younger one in the past?

... I loved when Artemis insulted Twilight.

this story is great. Update soon. TYPE ON!

Nice.

Yay! Second chapter, please! That was so funny :D