Pretty good. I know, I'm not much of a critic right now.

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a long time. I've been busy with my friends, and my girlfriend.

Anyway, good job on the chapter.

Good story. But, I think I missed the part where it tells about his powers.

Could you explain what his powers are?

P.S. Stay INSANE!

Good job kobez. No really I liked it, you made descriptions on the environment.

All you need is a little description on how Will is feeling. I'm still struggling with that.

P.S. Stay INSANE!

Good job there Kobez.

I can only find one thing to complain about. Descriptions, and nothing more. No offense there buddy! I had trouble with it too, and somehow I got the hand of it.

Rock on!

Man this is gonna be a sick story. Its already pretty damn sweet. Great job man!

Good job. I like the character.

My name is Lunatic 121, pleased to meet you.